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filled with imaginary wine
and tears
I walk between lines
of insanity
and despair
the city of heartbreak
thats where i am
and if you wonder why
just guess

It was you
your the reason I have to fall
to be able to feel
to hit my head
to cry
cause you broke my heart
and now its not bleeding anymore
so its gone
you desided to take it
along with everything I cared for
to place that i can't go to

i sit alone under a tree in the park
the wind is blowing at me
I close my eyes and pretend
it picks me up
and takes me back
back to when you were on the same earth
as me
and I was happy
and if your wondering why
just guess

It was you
your the reason I have to fall
to be able to feel
to hit my head
to cry
cause you broke my heart
and now its not bleeding anymore
so its gone
you desided to take it
along with everything I cared for
to a place I can't go

along with everything I cared for

By: Jayne Barkman
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It Was You

Contributed by Jay_ne3 on Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 06:48:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

empty bottles
filled with imaginary wine
and tears
I walk between lines
of insanity
and despair
the city of heartbreak
thats where i am
and if you wonder why
just guess

It was you
your the reason I have to fall
to be able to feel
to hit my head
to cry
cause you broke my heart
and now its not bleeding anymore
so its gone
you desided to take it
along with everything I cared for
to place that i can't go to

i sit alone under a tree in the park
the wind is blowing at me
I close my eyes and pretend
it picks me up
and takes me back
back to when you were on the same earth
as me
and I was happy
and if your wondering why
just guess

It was you
your the reason I have to fall
to be able to feel
to hit my head
to cry
cause you broke my heart
and now its not bleeding anymore
so its gone
you desided to take it
along with everything I cared for
to a place I can't go

along with everything I cared for

By: Jayne Barkman

Copyright © Jay_ne3 ... [ 2007-09-10 06:48:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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