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Array ( [sid] => 137339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Fine [time] => 2007-09-17 03:47:40 [hometext] => Ever give someone a chance and regretted it? [bodytext] => Yes, my dear, I'm fine
The knife stops the bleeding
The extra weight fades in time
And I've forgotten what I'm needing

I've already started to smile
(On occasion, if at all)
And if you wait a little while
You'll see my build up my wall

The tears have all been dried
They've been wiped away
(Soon all of them will be cried)
Little by little, day by day

My heart's been put back together
(As long as the duct tape holds)
All the time I'm feeling better
And I'm not completely cold

See, I'm doing alright on my own
Knowing you never cared
I'm facing the world all alone
And I'm not even scared [comments] => 3 [counter] => 405 [topic] => 56 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

I'm Fine

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 03:47:40 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Yes, my dear, I'm fine
The knife stops the bleeding
The extra weight fades in time
And I've forgotten what I'm needing

I've already started to smile
(On occasion, if at all)
And if you wait a little while
You'll see my build up my wall

The tears have all been dried
They've been wiped away
(Soon all of them will be cried)
Little by little, day by day

My heart's been put back together
(As long as the duct tape holds)
All the time I'm feeling better
And I'm not completely cold

See, I'm doing alright on my own
Knowing you never cared
I'm facing the world all alone
And I'm not even scared

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2007-09-17 03:47:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm Fine (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 07:50:33 AM AEST
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*gives you a big hug*

Hun, I think we've all been there. It sucks, I know.

Hang in there, ok?

Your poetry is getting better as you are growing, Kiela, this is really good. I did notice one tiny mistake, though:

You'll see my build up my wall

Is the first my meant to be me?

Anyway, good write hun. It's good to read something of yours again.

Loves ya lots.
Phil xxx

Re: I'm Fine (User Rating: 1 )
by Saruchan on Wednesday, 19th September 2007 @ 04:22:32 AM AEST
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Good for you not being scared and moving on no matter all the pain. sometimes all there is in life is broken pieces taped together to keep us going. Maybe it will be ok in time. Great and heartfelt write!

Re: I'm Fine (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 07:49:34 AM AEST
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Sadly we give people chances when all too often they don't deserve it.
Hindsight is a wonderful thing, but ultimately useless..
At least we learn something from our mistakes.

Steve

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