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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Give Me A Break
[time] => 2003-03-04 23:40:00
[hometext] => comment if you wish! I hope I am the only one who feels this way, but if you do, I would like to know how to deal with it.
[bodytext] => I think I may have been cursed
It seems as though my life
should have been preplanned and rehearsed
I have no Idea why I choose this path of pain
I do something that I thought was good
and trouble arises and hurt I gain
When will happiness come my way
when will I cry tears that come from joy
I can hardly wait for that day
I scare myself the way people want me too
I help them defeat me
I know this is true
I have become my own enemie in this game
afraid if I do something right
I will fail the same
I just want the chance to love me
to be proud of what I do
I want my soul to feel what it's like to be free
I want to ensure myself I am a great mother
and my children love me
like I am no other
I know that my eye sight is just fine
It must be something
like my soul is blind
All I can do is sit and wait
for God to heal my souls eyes
while I except my self tortured lifes fate.
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 257
[topic] => 32
[informant] => mckayla
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[ratings] => 1
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Give Me A Break
Contributed by
mckayla
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I think I may have been cursed
It seems as though my life
should have been preplanned and rehearsed
I have no Idea why I choose this path of pain
I do something that I thought was good
and trouble arises and hurt I gain
When will happiness come my way
when will I cry tears that come from joy
I can hardly wait for that day
I scare myself the way people want me too
I help them defeat me
I know this is true
I have become my own enemie in this game
afraid if I do something right
I will fail the same
I just want the chance to love me
to be proud of what I do
I want my soul to feel what it's like to be free
I want to ensure myself I am a great mother
and my children love me
like I am no other
I know that my eye sight is just fine
It must be something
like my soul is blind
All I can do is sit and wait
for God to heal my souls eyes
while I except my self tortured lifes fate.
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-03-04 23:40:00]
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by Heavenangel on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:44:37 PM AEST
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hang in there you really need to do for your self,go get a makeover,new hair cut something that makes you feel good!
~HeavenAngel~ |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by Spirit_Dancer on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:24:16 AM AEST
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This is very hurtful and makes you question yourself...feels defeating...maybe get into a church for support group.. you never know you may be feeling better in no time. If you are already doing that, give it time...you are already fighting this when you are alone, give yourself time to adjust to other people around you. Heart-breaking write..sending a hug in case you need one!
Love,
Spirit_Dancer...:) |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:04:11 PM AEST
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| so sad...do what i do, write, let it all out... |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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First of all, Im sending you a hug!!
Yes I have felt this way. I dont know what your
situation is but mine came from a long time of abusive relationships. The end result, leaving behind a hollow shell of Shelby. Things will get better. Light your favorite candles and take a hot bubble bath and admire everything about you!! |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:30:18 PM AEST
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Katherine; We all have from time to time beaten ourselves up over wrong decisions or not the best choices we've made. As you've seen from the other comments, you are not alone in feeling the way you do....and how best to deal with these feelings??...your commentors have provided you with some suggestions and I plan to email you...
rosie |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 01:29:31 PM AEST
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Warped, like a funhouse mirror, is the image we see of ourselves. Reality bends to our own self doubt and sense of unworth. But in the eyes of others, that which we see as our faults, are often cherished by those around us. For it is these very things that make us unique.
Nice write on a topic that all to often affects people. |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:18:21 PM AEST
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Hey, Mckayla I enjoyed this poem. When I started reading it I was reminded of my poem The Road for some odd reason. What I do or try to is forget about all the crap and concentrate on the good things... like in your case your kids. Sometimes it gets hard I know, but if yuor ever feeling like u can;t handle it PM me or e-mail me. Hang in there.
Peace,
Joel |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:31:37 AM AEST
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| this is a devestating peom, god! well written. |
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Re: Give Me A Break
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:00:08 AM AEST
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| I really like the "for god to heal my souls eyes" line its a very good write |
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