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[aid] => Mick
[title] => past love's shampooed
[time] => 2003-03-05 05:30:00
[hometext] => ha!
[bodytext] =>
my past loves are such
that they are in my past,
some were sweetly long and
some were too charmingly fast,
movin' on in my heart
no one has been such a part,
as the love i share today
his love in my life has a say,
some loves are now above
have learned a lot from my loves,
some were catalysts to changes
my life just rearranges,
only the bad ones i won't talk to
my openess let's me hurt 'tis true,
some have simply moved on
i wish them all well and a song,
they all have a place in my life
even the ones who 'caused strife,
the goodness i think of more
some are just closed doors,
my past love's are such, i don't
think of them t'day too much,
am very happy with who i'm seeing
he gives my life zing
makes my heart sing,
much caring love he brings,
with exception to one or two
none of them loved me true,
not to be even a little rude
but some of them about me had not a clue,
lol! what a motley crew
my past loves shampooed,
'cause real love is a blast
this is the love that shall last,
mostly the rest were half-mast
so bye bye now to the past.
[comments] => 9
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[topic] => 21
[informant] => ladyfawn
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 18
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
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past love's shampooed
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my past loves are such
that they are in my past,
some were sweetly long and
some were too charmingly fast,
movin' on in my heart
no one has been such a part,
as the love i share today
his love in my life has a say,
some loves are now above
have learned a lot from my loves,
some were catalysts to changes
my life just rearranges,
only the bad ones i won't talk to
my openess let's me hurt 'tis true,
some have simply moved on
i wish them all well and a song,
they all have a place in my life
even the ones who 'caused strife,
the goodness i think of more
some are just closed doors,
my past love's are such, i don't
think of them t'day too much,
am very happy with who i'm seeing
he gives my life zing
makes my heart sing,
much caring love he brings,
with exception to one or two
none of them loved me true,
not to be even a little rude
but some of them about me had not a clue,
lol! what a motley crew
my past loves shampooed,
'cause real love is a blast
this is the love that shall last,
mostly the rest were half-mast
so bye bye now to the past.
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2003-03-05 05:30:00]
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:26:09 AM AEST
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| Ummmh.. its allright . the poem is like a little cup of wine. venkat |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:33:32 AM AEST
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Thanks for the smile this morning, Ness...
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Jenni |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:57:01 AM AEST
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| LOL Wash them right out of your hair! Good one! Christina |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:56:18 PM AEST
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| lol, sometimes i think you think i'm someone else, dont ask me who, i care less, by now you must know what i'm like, i explore everything, within each of us individually our feelings evolve as we grow older, within humanity our feelings have evolved according to the changing circumstances of our experience, all of these changes it is in my nature to explore, and if you think that i would explore your exposed feelings without exploring and exposing my own feelings and fears then you have been in love with some figment of your imagination for the last 3 months cos it aint me that you're thinking of |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:59:29 PM AEST
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| p.s. i love you immensely babe, so ha! to you also |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:31:20 PM AEST
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A playful and yet lovely write maam. All loves leaves us something don't they. Enjoyed this thoroughly.-Russ
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by kolbrun on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 07:47:02 AM AEST
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| gagaaa... nessa this is a beauty!! my mouth has dropped to the floor on this one!! rocking write, so beautiful... kudos! ;0) -kolbrún |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:10:25 PM AEST
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beautifully done ladyfawn, you have such perfect ways of writting such perfect poems...great job, :O)
Lindsey |
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Re: past love's shampooed
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by Kirby on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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| I wrote a poem like this but mine was more evil! I loved this poem alot! Great....keep them coming! Love::Kirby |
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