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[aid] => mick
[title] => whole-hearted believer
[time] => 2007-10-10 12:25:42
[hometext] => i dont know. i was just feelings blue. i needed to write a happy ending. good always prevails. rememeber he died for you, so why not live for him.
[bodytext] => She laid there Trembling and distraught She was scared From the world that she got Everyone else seemed to have great lives Except for this one little girl Everyone else was happy and friendly While she was stuck in a horror-filled whirl She tried to get out but was suffocating Waiting for someone to let her go She was flailing and then gave up on her life She was now at an all time low She did things that she didn’t think about Didn’t know she would later regret She did things that ruined her childhood Her parents didn’t know her life was now a threat She didn’t overcome her feelings She didn’t try to get out of that mess She stayed there, stricken, on the floor As her breathing grew less and less She blamed her conscience for not being there He parents for not showing her the way She blamed everyone she could think of But now it was her debt to pay Her life was coming to an end But as most believers will tell She prayed for the soul she lost long ago And to her kneels she fell She became a whole-hearted believer With the last minute of her life She knew her debts were forgiven And she now walks in the light She past away a few months after But her story lived on through and through Sometimes you can still hear her laughter For her ghost is still near, protecting you For don’t let your life become lost And don’t forget who put you here He gave his whole life for you So why not try to be that sincere That’s the least we can do for our father The dad that is always there If we devote our lives to him forever Then forever will be more than our years. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 31 [informant] => thebrokenyouth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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