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The Dream Crashes
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deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 10:57:40 AM in AEST
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 Pieces of my dream lay out before me like so many... broken shards of glass.
I recall dropping the ornament. Golden orb falling in what seemed as motionless time. Shiny flickers of sparkling light reflected, linoleum lines. Knowing that I'd let go. One end of the ribbon free flowing and flow the orb did, crashing down.
Tears flooded my eyes As I watched it helplessly fall, scattering to pieces only to be swept away and discarded sadly just like unwanted trash.
Laura Howell Horner 10/20/07
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Re: The Dream Crashes
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 12:56:20 PM AEST (User
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I feel you on this flow.
As The sands of time
slowly flow
we remember what was lost......
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Re: The Dream Crashes
(User Rating: 1 ) by gribbs on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 03:25:41 AM AEST (User
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dreams lost, an experience of life to be mended by the beauty of light dancing on shards of glass...thoughtful write... |
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