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Array ( [sid] => 138121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invisible [time] => 2007-10-29 17:09:08 [hometext] => Being diferrent isn't always a walk in the park... [bodytext] => Slow the traffic and dim the lights
For i'll be walking again tonight
Footsteps to pavement always unheard
Free to disappear without notice

Cries go forever silent
Screams quietened by water
Outside i'm a humble man
Inside i'm your Daughter

Cannot you all hear my tears
Rolling on my cheeks for eighteen years
Scream my ever silent plea
Let me see, Set me free

I envy the ghosts, ever seen and noticed
Mediacized, Publicized, always taken care of
Confused and afraid i hold myself alone, unseen
Please find me, i'm the same Girl i've always been

Invisibility... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 32 [informant] => law_glen18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Invisible

Contributed by law_glen18 on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 05:09:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Slow the traffic and dim the lights
For i'll be walking again tonight
Footsteps to pavement always unheard
Free to disappear without notice

Cries go forever silent
Screams quietened by water
Outside i'm a humble man
Inside i'm your Daughter

Cannot you all hear my tears
Rolling on my cheeks for eighteen years
Scream my ever silent plea
Let me see, Set me free

I envy the ghosts, ever seen and noticed
Mediacized, Publicized, always taken care of
Confused and afraid i hold myself alone, unseen
Please find me, i'm the same Girl i've always been

Invisibility...

Copyright © law_glen18 ... [ 2007-10-29 17:09:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:52:04 PM AEST
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Wow this is really good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 01:06:17 AM AEST
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Well crafted work that rolls effortlessly from start to end.
Being different, or perhaps being unique ?

Steve

Re: Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 11:03:21 AM AEST
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Being different is in our genetics, conformity is something entirely different. Societies expectations, pray to God we all don't fall into that trap, I choose not to be just another number, we're all unique and should remain that way. Heaven forbid the day that the individual cease to exist. Nice poem.

Rich

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