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Array ( [sid] => 138300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can't shake this feeling.. [time] => 2007-11-06 07:40:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tuesday, July 03, 2007

* I can't shake this feeling..

I can't shake this feeling..

This feeling inside me

From what I know

I know that I do not trust you

But what I do feel

Leads me to believe you

Until you show me no reason to believe

I begin to lose what trust was even there

I then start to wonder why you'd even say

You cared

Most importantly

That you'd even want to be with me

If you wanted me to be with you

You wouldn't expect me to just straight out trust you

Not after all we've been through

You would understand this feeling I have

You'd show me what your worth

That you are worth..

Worth the try

Especially

Worth for me to try

But

So far all you've done

is just sit around with barely a reply

do you understand why I can't shake this feeling

what I am afraid of is not caring..

..at all

unless that is what your goal is

is for me to let you go

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jillian_phan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I can't shake this feeling..

Contributed by jillian_phan on Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 07:40:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Tuesday, July 03, 2007

* I can't shake this feeling..

I can't shake this feeling..

This feeling inside me

From what I know

I know that I do not trust you

But what I do feel

Leads me to believe you

Until you show me no reason to believe

I begin to lose what trust was even there

I then start to wonder why you'd even say

You cared

Most importantly

That you'd even want to be with me

If you wanted me to be with you

You wouldn't expect me to just straight out trust you

Not after all we've been through

You would understand this feeling I have

You'd show me what your worth

That you are worth..

Worth the try

Especially

Worth for me to try

But

So far all you've done

is just sit around with barely a reply

do you understand why I can't shake this feeling

what I am afraid of is not caring..

..at all

unless that is what your goal is

is for me to let you go

Copyright © jillian_phan ... [ 2007-11-06 07:40:21]
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Re: I can't shake this feeling.. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 11:53:45 AM AEST
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this is very heartfelt and sad.. such eloquent wording.. very well written.. great job here

rock on,

vampyress jenni

Re: I can't shake this feeling.. (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST
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this poem has alot of strong words and you make them ever stronger and i know what this poem is all about.

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