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There is nothing more to write
Nothing else to write for you
Maybe these few more words
Before I finally shut the door of my love for you
The sleepless nights I had
Thinking only about you
How I wish the darkness just eats me up
No one will know I am hiding in the darkness
Only then my heart can heal itself
I am a burden to my own heart
Oh, why can’t I just let go
And the more I think about you
The crazier I sound to myself
Oh, why I can’t just forget
My sanity held up only by a thin slice of thread
I need to hold on to it
If I am ever going to come out from this mess
So completely fool by my heart
Tripped and I fell hard
Just this once and I am eating the dust now
As the words became more and more repetitive each time
I know is time for me to really let go
Because although I finally found you
I did not find your love
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Time to Let Go

Contributed by funnyface09 on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 09:02:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I do not know what to write anymore
There is nothing more to write
Nothing else to write for you
Maybe these few more words
Before I finally shut the door of my love for you
The sleepless nights I had
Thinking only about you
How I wish the darkness just eats me up
No one will know I am hiding in the darkness
Only then my heart can heal itself
I am a burden to my own heart
Oh, why can’t I just let go
And the more I think about you
The crazier I sound to myself
Oh, why I can’t just forget
My sanity held up only by a thin slice of thread
I need to hold on to it
If I am ever going to come out from this mess
So completely fool by my heart
Tripped and I fell hard
Just this once and I am eating the dust now
As the words became more and more repetitive each time
I know is time for me to really let go
Because although I finally found you
I did not find your love

Copyright Â© funnyface09 ... [ 2007-11-16 21:02:30]
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Re: Time to Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 11:16:31 PM AEST
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I somehow will remember the last 2 lines of this poem the most...you saved the best for the last...its sad the way life shapes things...but its imp to realise life has a lot more to offer...
be strong.

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