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40%-60% (US AND THEM)
Contributed by
gribbs
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Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 05:34:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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I hate writing poems or lyrical expressions
They bring me down so much
I try to write of happy things
Of flowers and bees and such
But usually I write of people
Theyre such a pathetic lot
The way they wine and cry about things
Boo-hooing little snots
I try to write without drinking
But it usually comes out all wrong
So happy, so gay, how great life is
The perfect words of a song
No Ill keep writing these forty percent thoughts
Hoping all the way
That maybe in my lifetime
Higher consciousness will conquer and stay
Keith W. Saunders
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gribbs
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2007-11-22 05:34:59]
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Re: 40%-60% (US AND THEM)
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 10:02:53 AM AEST
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The title caught my attention right away.
I think that forty percent of thought on this page is pretty damn good.
Loved this write..... great poem.
Happy Thanksgiving tomorrow
Michelle |
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