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You gave it back cracked
You saw it and didn’t show a sign of pain
While I sat and bleed
I cried for you and you bathed
I killed my self
You sat on my grave
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Pain

Contributed by killer81849 on Monday, 3rd December 2007 @ 04:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I gave my heart to you
You gave it back cracked
You saw it and didn’t show a sign of pain
While I sat and bleed
I cried for you and you bathed
I killed my self
You sat on my grave

Copyright Â© killer81849 ... [ 2007-12-03 16:44:19]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 01:08:13 AM AEST
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WOW! i really,really like this poem!

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 07:09:41 AM AEST
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Cumon you no I lIKE wEMON SO--Feel The Reaper-The Reaper-Hears The Twist The Reaper-It May Of Not Been Me But I lost a love relation ship due to-Children Of The Grave--they needed me and wanted to show me something and found very useful information. A biker named friend of 25 and more years and the constant ect. no right to morn I personally wanted a Bill passed for morners rights to be left alone to morn for the dead even at work without being antisocial and works well will religion laws of many. Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 03:25:24 PM AEST
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hm, very strong emotions showed in this,
good work
Flamingblade

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by evilcherry312 on Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 10:48:06 AM AEST
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You have this way of expressing so much using so few words. Nicely done; I felt your sorrow and pain.

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