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Array ( [sid] => 139008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Dear Friend [time] => 2007-12-05 23:08:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Lie after lie
Sigh after sigh
No tears rollin down
But, inside I cry
You were my friend
blood till the end
now that I need you
don't know where you been
now lookin around
and nothin I've found
can replace what I lost
can't turn memories off
playing through my head
the things we both said
a knife in the heart
where do I start?
A feeling so good
now misunderstood
the pieces won't hold
"Im sorry" gets old
beaten down by neglect
a lack of respect
you never think of me
or try to see how I see
I've been the only one there
for the past seven years
and with one word "goodbye"
my last bit of faith in you died
half my soul dead
a blow to the head
completley alone
how's it feel on your own?
No turning back
no longer in tact
The pieces won't fit
they've frayed bit by bit
a knife in the heart
where do I start?
no more can I try
my dear freind goodbye [comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 43 [informant] => gurlg0newr0ng [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Dear Friend

Contributed by gurlg0newr0ng on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 11:08:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Lie after lie
Sigh after sigh
No tears rollin down
But, inside I cry
You were my friend
blood till the end
now that I need you
don't know where you been
now lookin around
and nothin I've found
can replace what I lost
can't turn memories off
playing through my head
the things we both said
a knife in the heart
where do I start?
A feeling so good
now misunderstood
the pieces won't hold
"Im sorry" gets old
beaten down by neglect
a lack of respect
you never think of me
or try to see how I see
I've been the only one there
for the past seven years
and with one word "goodbye"
my last bit of faith in you died
half my soul dead
a blow to the head
completley alone
how's it feel on your own?
No turning back
no longer in tact
The pieces won't fit
they've frayed bit by bit
a knife in the heart
where do I start?
no more can I try
my dear freind goodbye

Copyright © gurlg0newr0ng ... [ 2007-12-05 23:08:20]
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Re: My Dear Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:47:27 AM AEST
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This is sad..im sorry your so hurt..Good luck

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