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Array ( [sid] => 139009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => West. [time] => 2007-12-06 00:02:51 [hometext] => Really weird poem about a guy i went out with. [bodytext] => West, you were my mistake, my biggest mistake.
What a mess we made.
West, you're not a lover or a fighter, just an outside stander,
waiting for someone to give you everything
And everything you get for nothing..
You get everything you ever want for nothing

Everybody thinks your poor as dirt
Cuz you wouldn't buy pants and you wear the same shirt
But I know better, so do all your friends
We laugh and we joke but we're really jealous
Cuz everybody loves you just as soon as they meet you
everybody thinks they know you
but no one really does.
we all hear a different side of the story.

These days are not going to last long
You're so young, don't decieve yourself
when you decide right from wrong.

I thought I could protect you, from everything
But you don't want it
So take a hit
Get rid of it
All of your precious innocence
and all the girls you meet will still love you the best
it doesn't matter what you do
everyone will still love you
and all the guys you meet will still think your the same old west
more than anyone else could be.

but you won't be the same to me.




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West.

Contributed by meadcomposition on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:02:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



West, you were my mistake, my biggest mistake.
What a mess we made.
West, you're not a lover or a fighter, just an outside stander,
waiting for someone to give you everything
And everything you get for nothing..
You get everything you ever want for nothing

Everybody thinks your poor as dirt
Cuz you wouldn't buy pants and you wear the same shirt
But I know better, so do all your friends
We laugh and we joke but we're really jealous
Cuz everybody loves you just as soon as they meet you
everybody thinks they know you
but no one really does.
we all hear a different side of the story.

These days are not going to last long
You're so young, don't decieve yourself
when you decide right from wrong.

I thought I could protect you, from everything
But you don't want it
So take a hit
Get rid of it
All of your precious innocence
and all the girls you meet will still love you the best
it doesn't matter what you do
everyone will still love you
and all the guys you meet will still think your the same old west
more than anyone else could be.

but you won't be the same to me.








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Re: West. (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:45:13 AM AEST
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I found this to be very interesting! He sounds like a real "stud" ,especially the part about weraingt the same shirt !! ineteresting poem,i enjoyed reading it


Re: West. (User Rating: 1 )
by StephaniePaige on Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:59:02 AM AEST
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bahaha josh is a stud ahah.
Ya know, this really made me think... not just abou thim, but about sort of everyone we know. i really like it.




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