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Array ( [sid] => 139019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye candle light [time] => 2007-12-06 04:19:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The candle of life is slowly going out
Into the depths of despair I’m fading

A shallow heart ,
A nightmare so painful
Can’t tell .

Darkness is slowly taking over
I can not fight it ,
Its over ,

No more fight ,
No more fair ,
No more pain and agony ,

Only the dept of shadow ,
A pit as black as the night.

For some a cadge ,
For me freedom ,
The freedom I crave for ,

The candle of life is out ,
No more pain ,

I’m free ,
Free at last .

Don’t cry for me ,
I will al love you even in death

Don’t worry ,
Just let me slit my wrist one more time
For one time ,
Eternal.

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Goodbye candle light

Contributed by Ran on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 04:19:33 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

The candle of life is slowly going out
Into the depths of despair I’m fading

A shallow heart ,
A nightmare so painful
Can’t tell .

Darkness is slowly taking over
I can not fight it ,
Its over ,

No more fight ,
No more fair ,
No more pain and agony ,

Only the dept of shadow ,
A pit as black as the night.

For some a cadge ,
For me freedom ,
The freedom I crave for ,

The candle of life is out ,
No more pain ,

I’m free ,
Free at last .

Don’t cry for me ,
I will al love you even in death

Don’t worry ,
Just let me slit my wrist one more time
For one time ,
Eternal.

Copyright Â© Ran ... [ 2007-12-06 04:19:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Goodbye candle light (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 08:22:49 AM AEST
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An eloquent farewell, one I hope is only fictional.
Take care,
David

Re: Goodbye candle light (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:00:22 PM AEST
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I really like how you poetically describe what your doing throughout this piece and then in the last stanza, you bluntly state that your gonna slit your wrist. It carries a bit of shock to it. It is a great ending to such a despairing poem.
~Mark~

Re: Goodbye candle light (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 09:46:57 AM AEST
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Iagree ti is incredibly written.
Welcome to our global family here at ypdc. I noticed you jus checked in with us but please don't check out on the same day you checked in.
Stick around we need writers like you.
Luv, huggs, prayer, peace, joy,knowlege, wisdom, faith, hope,
emy

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