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Array ( [sid] => 139023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Memories [time] => 2007-12-06 12:14:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My reflection in my mirror melting
In front of my face..

The blood running in my vain is
Cold..

Don’t leave me out here all along

I don’t want to just waste away

Into just memories

Sad filled with tears

But my reflection in my mirror is
Melting away..

The blood running in my vain is
Cold...

I lay back here watching the stars
Fading into distant..

Please don’t leave me here along with

Just the tears drown my soul,

Where did all my friends go?

Left here all along

Just melting into the darkness the
Darkness is cold..

Without a reflection to ease my
Loneliness,

The tears keep comin like the
Thunder of rain..

La la la la la.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 43 [informant] => honey56 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Fading Memories

Contributed by honey56 on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My reflection in my mirror melting
In front of my face..

The blood running in my vain is
Cold..

Don’t leave me out here all along

I don’t want to just waste away

Into just memories

Sad filled with tears

But my reflection in my mirror is
Melting away..

The blood running in my vain is
Cold...

I lay back here watching the stars
Fading into distant..

Please don’t leave me here along with

Just the tears drown my soul,

Where did all my friends go?

Left here all along

Just melting into the darkness the
Darkness is cold..

Without a reflection to ease my
Loneliness,

The tears keep comin like the
Thunder of rain..

La la la la la.

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2007-12-06 12:14:52]
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Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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such a sad write Honey" well done. merry christmas to you my friend...Vincent

Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th December 2007 @ 03:20:54 PM AEST
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So sad is your poem and yet honest in it's
interpitation of each and evey emotion you
portray here. Beautiful work my friend . . .

Likewise, have a safe and warm holiday . . .

Ben

Re: Fading Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 11:02:35 AM AEST
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It is quite sad but nonetheless beautiful...
It makes me feel very empty inside...
I think thats what you were demonstrating through these very anguished words...
Nicely done...

~Mark~

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