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Array ( [sid] => 139100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a bad dream [time] => 2007-12-10 10:01:26 [hometext] => my best friend just passed this is for her i love you hoolie [bodytext] => this cant be real
just a horrible dream
ill wake up from in the morning

You cant be gone

you mean to much
to the world
even if you didnt believe it yourself

I tried to warn you

tell you i cared
but you blew me off
like so many times before

i didnt just lose my best friend

i lost the godmother to my child
who youll never know
i lost my little sister

and most of all my confident

i love you so much
this cant be true
just a horrible dream

i cant wait to wake up from

Drugs brought us toghether
and then tore as apart

you we're so strong
but i guess not strong enough

you lied to me
over and over
yet you would always be

my little miss hoolie

please god
just let me wake up

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a bad dream

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 10:01:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

this cant be real
just a horrible dream
ill wake up from in the morning

You cant be gone

you mean to much
to the world
even if you didnt believe it yourself

I tried to warn you

tell you i cared
but you blew me off
like so many times before

i didnt just lose my best friend

i lost the godmother to my child
who youll never know
i lost my little sister

and most of all my confident

i love you so much
this cant be true
just a horrible dream

i cant wait to wake up from

Drugs brought us toghether
and then tore as apart

you we're so strong
but i guess not strong enough

you lied to me
over and over
yet you would always be

my little miss hoolie

please god
just let me wake up

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2007-12-10 10:01:26]
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Re: a bad dream (User Rating: 1 )
by evilcherry312 on Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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My eyes got teary reading this....your love for your friend is obvious here, and I am truly sorry for your loss; may you find peace.

Re: a bad dream (User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 02:35:35 AM AEST
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I understand loosing someone you love dearly. I lost my Grandmother July 24th, 2006, I lost my Gradfather December 2nd, 2006, and I lost my unborn daughter December 1st of this year. I really hope you can find peace.

God bless!

Re: a bad dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 02:58:54 PM AEST
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I am very sorry for the loss of your friend...Russ

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