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Array ( [sid] => 139164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A fool in love [time] => 2007-12-13 16:49:25 [hometext] => How can something that can make you feel like King of the World one minute and a fool the next be a good thing? [bodytext] => Separated by this mighty gulf,
Yet only a few steps away
I find I always walk by your desk
And you smile at me everyday

Yet do you really understand
Just what that smile can do
It makes my legs feel very weak
And my heart starts beat anew

Even on those rare days
When you’re feeling down
I do my best to lift the mood
And even act the clown

Should trouble ever come your way
Please do not despair
Just look my way you’ll see my hand
To lift your every care

Although I know I am a fool
For your heart is already taken
I pledge to you my heart and soul
From my dreams do not awaken






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A fool in love

Contributed by mrpeanut64 on Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 04:49:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Separated by this mighty gulf,
Yet only a few steps away
I find I always walk by your desk
And you smile at me everyday

Yet do you really understand
Just what that smile can do
It makes my legs feel very weak
And my heart starts beat anew

Even on those rare days
When you’re feeling down
I do my best to lift the mood
And even act the clown

Should trouble ever come your way
Please do not despair
Just look my way you’ll see my hand
To lift your every care

Although I know I am a fool
For your heart is already taken
I pledge to you my heart and soul
From my dreams do not awaken










Copyright © mrpeanut64 ... [ 2007-12-13 16:49:25]
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Re: A fool in love (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:25:46 AM AEST
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Planters mr peanut with a petrified cain without a sickle attached for he is not the reaper but probly Ignorant The saying work for peanuts.Poem brought back memories and is like a very liery dog or cat just a dog thats been through hell,Beaten by physical&verbal abuse as well,Emotions cautiuos as he can be,One wrong move and its history,-Time Its On Myside You Come Running Back You Come Runnin Back To Me Meee-as in the lyric as always true-Follow Me-good poem brought back inner feelings.Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr.


Re: A fool in love (User Rating: 1 )
by conorshawn on Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 01:39:38 PM AEST
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very powerfull




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