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Bitter
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 04:45:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When I looked into your eyes,
you turned your head and looked away,
telling me that I'm always bitter
when you never looked at me when I smiled
and when I tried to hold your hand
- you yanked it away
and times I could see you
you made excuses to get away...
And you still say I'm bitter
and still I'm not surprised
and neither are you
when I turn my head
and look the other way.
As music plays
just like the rhythm of life;
with the beat of love and
the screams of hate,
silence of depression
and the sadness when it ends.
Pain that turns numb
and anger that succumbs
to a few words that merely express
the mess that all have become.
When the time comes,
it will leave like Autumn
and the hope will cling
like babies to mothers...
for a better tomorrow!
Chances are wasted
like a genius locked in a small room,
to never experience everything that
life could be,
but not for long will I be,
I'm not bitter anymore,
you see.
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2007-12-27 04:45:49]
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Re: Bitter
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:17:01 AM AEST
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| I totally relate to this write. This is often how the relationship ends, and I have been there too many times. I like your choice of words, and though the ending was a little strange, overall I really liked it. Good write! |
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