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Array ( [sid] => 139565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All I Could Do [time] => 2008-01-03 22:59:15 [hometext] => I'll never forget the day I asked my ex to marry me! I know I asked her at the wrong time, Durning the time after she left me! I almost knew she was going to tell me no? Anyway I needed to prove to her of my love for her after 7 years, She never said Yes. [bodytext] => I lift up my soal from this pile....This mess around me made from your denial....I fell for you and threw my love at your feet....And all you could do was tease me about my defeat....

Are you happy for telling me no....Because the way you rejected me made me feel low....Did I not stay down at your feet and pleed for understanding....

But your mind was set....But I kept telling you....Remember how we met....It was pure,real and that''s what you always wanted....But somehow you seem so confused, Trust me....I'm not amused....

I always promised you that I'd understand, No matter what....But something inside you must be deeply cut?

I know you must turn me away....But always remember what happened this day....I was on my knees for you, Will you marry me....It was all I could do?
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All I Could Do

Contributed by 143 on Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I lift up my soal from this pile....This mess around me made from your denial....I fell for you and threw my love at your feet....And all you could do was tease me about my defeat....

Are you happy for telling me no....Because the way you rejected me made me feel low....Did I not stay down at your feet and pleed for understanding....

But your mind was set....But I kept telling you....Remember how we met....It was pure,real and that''s what you always wanted....But somehow you seem so confused, Trust me....I'm not amused....

I always promised you that I'd understand, No matter what....But something inside you must be deeply cut?

I know you must turn me away....But always remember what happened this day....I was on my knees for you, Will you marry me....It was all I could do?




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Re: All I Could Do (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 01:22:26 AM AEST
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oh how sad...


Re: All I Could Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 03:33:33 AM AEST
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Love will bring you to your knees!! But I hope you truly love open her heart before it is to late!!

God Bless!!!

And Pray About it!!!




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