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Array ( [sid] => 139735 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wake up [time] => 2008-01-11 17:31:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In the blink of an eye, it's over,,
as the stars stop to show their twinkle,
it's gone,,
as we share a thoughts of whats to be,,
their gone as the wind,,
why must thing be so complicated,
why must we live in a shell of one,
everything can stop in a blink of an eye,
or just a breath away, its over,
its up to those who believe, who want,
who loves, who knows what they truly want,
some chose to close their eyes,,
some chose to not believe,,
and theirs those who just don't care,,
on any given day ,,its just a breath away,
search for whats in your heart,
you will find, what you seek if you truly want it,,
make it happen,,,
before it's to late,,,

craig s. meeks [comments] => 2 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 23 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

wake up

Contributed by spooky on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 05:31:51 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

In the blink of an eye, it's over,,
as the stars stop to show their twinkle,
it's gone,,
as we share a thoughts of whats to be,,
their gone as the wind,,
why must thing be so complicated,
why must we live in a shell of one,
everything can stop in a blink of an eye,
or just a breath away, its over,
its up to those who believe, who want,
who loves, who knows what they truly want,
some chose to close their eyes,,
some chose to not believe,,
and theirs those who just don't care,,
on any given day ,,its just a breath away,
search for whats in your heart,
you will find, what you seek if you truly want it,,
make it happen,,,
before it's to late,,,

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2008-01-11 17:31:51]
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Re: wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 10:16:16 PM AEST
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Very good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by kaycas on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 03:42:37 AM AEST
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"in the blink of an eye" and "as the stars lose their twinkle", it shows us how delicately we can hold on to some things that are precious to us. I really enjoyed it.
Kay

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