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I clench my fists, I close my eyes
I don't know why I'm treated this way
I wish this would just go away

I am torn from everything I know and love
Imprisoned in this house, that seemed to be sent from "above"
Why won't this stop, it just gets worse
For 8 years it seems I've been living with this curse

I can't do this anymore, this is my only way out
This is my last resort, there is no doubt
This pain just builds, it won't subside
I've tried running and I can not hide

Goodbye to you, who called yourselves my friends
Thank you for that torment, that never seemed to end
Goodbye my dear family, you held me prisoner long enough
And goodbye my only love, who I never knew, nor saw, nor touched [comments] => 3 [counter] => 329 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MissTeenSuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

My Last Letter

Contributed by MissTeenSuicide on Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 08:07:20 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Silent tears fall, I begin to cry
I clench my fists, I close my eyes
I don't know why I'm treated this way
I wish this would just go away

I am torn from everything I know and love
Imprisoned in this house, that seemed to be sent from "above"
Why won't this stop, it just gets worse
For 8 years it seems I've been living with this curse

I can't do this anymore, this is my only way out
This is my last resort, there is no doubt
This pain just builds, it won't subside
I've tried running and I can not hide

Goodbye to you, who called yourselves my friends
Thank you for that torment, that never seemed to end
Goodbye my dear family, you held me prisoner long enough
And goodbye my only love, who I never knew, nor saw, nor touched

Copyright © MissTeenSuicide ... [ 2008-01-13 08:07:20]
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Re: My Last Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 12:05:01 PM AEST
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Verry sad but well written.
I'll pray for you.
Hope this is just good writting.
Huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: My Last Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by marie on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 10:53:16 AM AEST
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this is beautiful,
but i beg you, if this is seriously how you feel, know that you are not alone. last week i lost a very dear friend of mine...it hurts so bad i cant even think straight. please, dont do something that would be so permanant...please.

Re: My Last Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 02:44:27 AM AEST
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Great poetry when you aks me and great closing line

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