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Array ( [sid] => 139808 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When you.............. [time] => 2008-01-15 06:56:37 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to somone who i loved but now have lost.......... [bodytext] => When you think of your best friend, what images come to mind?
Well for me its............
When you ate an entire piece of pie in 2 bites............
When you get embarressed when I ask you to say your middle names...........
When you think you know the answer but you really don't.............
When you cared about me getting cold and wanted to give me your jacket to put around me...........
When you look at me and smile and I can see the twinkle in your eyes.............
When you wear your pink tie and look so darn cute................
When you always asked me "What do you think?"..................
When you told me that you day dream about my "stunning green eyes"...........
When you wanted to hug me but seemed to shy so i had to make the first move.........
When you wear your helmet and think it makes you look tough when it doesn't............
When you held me for the first time and my heart skipped a beat...............
When when you looked at me with those beautiful blue eyes and ask me if iam ok................
When you almost let me win at badminton..............
When you looked at a piece of lego and saw a boat..............
When you laughed at me for seeing a finger and a man's head in the same piece of lego...........
When you tried to speak in Irish but only kenw one phrase............
When you taught me how to play draughts and let me win once...........
When you stand up there is this little thing that you do that is so adorable..........
When you said that you were going to teach me how to play darts using socks after you heard my dream............
When you looked at me with your one good eye after i had accidently poked the other one.......(sorry again)........
When you kept texting me even when I didn't have credit...............
When you sent me that picture of you the one were you look a little cross but very cute.........
When you left your snood at my house so I had something to cuddle.........
When you told me that I was the only girl your eyes would rest upon...........
When you told me that you would travel around thae world just to see me for one hour..........
When you let me rest my head on your shoulder............
When you tried to make out you were smarter then me and I just played along..........
When you laughed at my silly dreams...........
When you trusted me with your serect.............
When you said you would breack a guys arm if he ever hurt me................

and when you woke me up just to say goodnight...............

I miss you............. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Puppy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
When you..............

Contributed by Puppy on Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:56:37 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



When you think of your best friend, what images come to mind?
Well for me its............
When you ate an entire piece of pie in 2 bites............
When you get embarressed when I ask you to say your middle names...........
When you think you know the answer but you really don't.............
When you cared about me getting cold and wanted to give me your jacket to put around me...........
When you look at me and smile and I can see the twinkle in your eyes.............
When you wear your pink tie and look so darn cute................
When you always asked me "What do you think?"..................
When you told me that you day dream about my "stunning green eyes"...........
When you wanted to hug me but seemed to shy so i had to make the first move.........
When you wear your helmet and think it makes you look tough when it doesn't............
When you held me for the first time and my heart skipped a beat...............
When when you looked at me with those beautiful blue eyes and ask me if iam ok................
When you almost let me win at badminton..............
When you looked at a piece of lego and saw a boat..............
When you laughed at me for seeing a finger and a man's head in the same piece of lego...........
When you tried to speak in Irish but only kenw one phrase............
When you taught me how to play draughts and let me win once...........
When you stand up there is this little thing that you do that is so adorable..........
When you said that you were going to teach me how to play darts using socks after you heard my dream............
When you looked at me with your one good eye after i had accidently poked the other one.......(sorry again)........
When you kept texting me even when I didn't have credit...............
When you sent me that picture of you the one were you look a little cross but very cute.........
When you left your snood at my house so I had something to cuddle.........
When you told me that I was the only girl your eyes would rest upon...........
When you told me that you would travel around thae world just to see me for one hour..........
When you let me rest my head on your shoulder............
When you tried to make out you were smarter then me and I just played along..........
When you laughed at my silly dreams...........
When you trusted me with your serect.............
When you said you would breack a guys arm if he ever hurt me................

and when you woke me up just to say goodnight...............

I miss you.............




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Re: When you.............. (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 02:00:18 AM AEST
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this is cute..enjoyed the read

ki




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