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Array ( [sid] => 139870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Objectification [time] => 2008-01-17 15:45:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hot black skirt,
I tell you what a number,
She comes walking on in,
Comes strolling in like thunder.

Lady where’d you come from?
Tell me what’s your story?
Your not single you say?
I don’t quite get it; sorry.

You try to break her morals,
When you know that she is weak,
Confuse and feed her lies,
Until the point where she can’t speak.

And she always feels sympathy,
For the poor boy who lost it all,
Sometimes can’t quite help it,
In joining in their fall.

Offers them solutions,
But all they want is sex,
Not hard to understand,
It’s not all that complex.

Tear her apart with your eyes,
Strip her naked mentally,
Feed her all those lies,
Have her almost physically.

Intelligent and well grounded,
She’s classy and well dressed,
Naturally beautiful,
She’s just one of the best.

But she’s too special for you,
And the man she has is real,
Not a sex-starved bastard,
But one who really feels.

And in the end of it all,
She’ll walk through that door,
Leaving you with a memory,
Of only wanting more.
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Objectification

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 03:45:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Hot black skirt,
I tell you what a number,
She comes walking on in,
Comes strolling in like thunder.

Lady where’d you come from?
Tell me what’s your story?
Your not single you say?
I don’t quite get it; sorry.

You try to break her morals,
When you know that she is weak,
Confuse and feed her lies,
Until the point where she can’t speak.

And she always feels sympathy,
For the poor boy who lost it all,
Sometimes can’t quite help it,
In joining in their fall.

Offers them solutions,
But all they want is sex,
Not hard to understand,
It’s not all that complex.

Tear her apart with your eyes,
Strip her naked mentally,
Feed her all those lies,
Have her almost physically.

Intelligent and well grounded,
She’s classy and well dressed,
Naturally beautiful,
She’s just one of the best.

But she’s too special for you,
And the man she has is real,
Not a sex-starved bastard,
But one who really feels.

And in the end of it all,
She’ll walk through that door,
Leaving you with a memory,
Of only wanting more.

Copyright Â© XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2008-01-17 15:45:08]
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Re: Objectification (User Rating: 1 )
by eden on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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AWSOMENESS!!
women rock! haha.
good job! LOOOVEEE IT

Re: Objectification (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 06:11:29 PM AEST
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Very good! I really felt the emotion building and releasing at the end.
Very sad!
Keep up the good work!

Re: Objectification (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 07:11:33 AM AEST
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AWSOME write. I loved this...it is such a true picture...i'm just amazed by this. thank you for posting.

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