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Array ( [sid] => 139952 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Calling Mr. Custer [time] => 2008-01-22 10:11:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Over in the valley of the stars

Filled with bow arrows and
Grass

Laying on their bellies crawling
Around

Trying to keep our hair

I think we need to contact Mr
Custer

Come on Mr Custer help us
Please

For we want look good without
Our hair

It’s so cold over in this valley

You can tell how the stars twinkle
And drop the confetti

Frost is dripping off the moon

Freezing us straight down to our
Shoes

Please, Mr Custer

Bring us some thermal socks

Don’t forget the long johns for it’s
Gave my knee frost bite

Who you out their?

Waiting to take our scalp

Dating will be no more for

Who want a bald head woman?

So we’ll fighting to keep our hair

Into this valley of the stars

It’s just know kidding around

Even thou the valley light’s up
So beautiful

It’s just a figment of your illusion

Come on Mr Custer

Please move a bit faster

If not we”ll be force to stay in this
Permanent pose

With icicles hanging as confetti

Down in this valley of the stars

With icicles been our tomb...

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Calling Mr. Custer

Contributed by honey56 on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 10:11:00 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Over in the valley of the stars

Filled with bow arrows and
Grass

Laying on their bellies crawling
Around

Trying to keep our hair

I think we need to contact Mr
Custer

Come on Mr Custer help us
Please

For we want look good without
Our hair

It’s so cold over in this valley

You can tell how the stars twinkle
And drop the confetti

Frost is dripping off the moon

Freezing us straight down to our
Shoes

Please, Mr Custer

Bring us some thermal socks

Don’t forget the long johns for it’s
Gave my knee frost bite

Who you out their?

Waiting to take our scalp

Dating will be no more for

Who want a bald head woman?

So we’ll fighting to keep our hair

Into this valley of the stars

It’s just know kidding around

Even thou the valley light’s up
So beautiful

It’s just a figment of your illusion

Come on Mr Custer

Please move a bit faster

If not we”ll be force to stay in this
Permanent pose

With icicles hanging as confetti

Down in this valley of the stars

With icicles been our tomb...





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Re: Calling Mr. Custer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 01:09:47 PM AEST
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I noticed that you posted comments on a couple of my poems so i though id return the favour. I liked this poem, its different from what i am use to but I enjoyed it. It was humorous in a sense and some words make me feel what you were writing "Freezing us straight down to our
Shoes"

Good write, hope to hear more from you


Re: Calling Mr. Custer (User Rating: 1 )
by Harmony on Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 05:54:54 AM AEST
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would you an icicle through your head than be bald ? :D


Re: Calling Mr. Custer (User Rating: 1 )
by Tweeky on Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:04:57 AM AEST
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Thankyou so much for the comment , I appreciate it alot .
I have been reading through some of your work and you have a good way with word's.
I like this poem , it's light hearted and has a nice rythem.
Take care
xx


Re: Calling Mr. Custer (User Rating: 1 )
by SamJoelle on Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 05:20:02 PM AEST
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i really like this it's neat!
Good job mate :]




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