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Array ( [sid] => 14022 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Eternity [time] => 2003-03-10 13:00:00 [hometext] => I fell in love two years ago with the most wonderful man and had yet to even see him until Feb. 18th....I spent three wonderful days in his company and then had to return home only to realize I should have went sooner because I lost him to someone else..... [bodytext] => I wrapped you in my sweet embrace
even if it was only for a little while
I outlined every last feature on your face
just so I could remember your smile
When I close my eyes your in my arms again
even tho when I open them your not
These tears are of happiness not pain
caused only by the joy you brought
I love you and everything you gave me
even tho you are not mine to have forever
Thank you for showing me a small piece of eternity
to leave is something I wanted to do never
I'll never forget our time together
and the things that you taught me
I'll love you always and forever
My love, my life, my eternity.

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My Eternity

Contributed by suzy on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I wrapped you in my sweet embrace
even if it was only for a little while
I outlined every last feature on your face
just so I could remember your smile
When I close my eyes your in my arms again
even tho when I open them your not
These tears are of happiness not pain
caused only by the joy you brought
I love you and everything you gave me
even tho you are not mine to have forever
Thank you for showing me a small piece of eternity
to leave is something I wanted to do never
I'll never forget our time together
and the things that you taught me
I'll love you always and forever
My love, my life, my eternity.

Copyright © suzy ... [ 2003-03-10 13:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 04:14:38 PM AEST
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Wow, Great write. This poem gives me a new perspective on someone I thought I would marry, who walked away from me. Thanks for sharing....

Re: My Eternity (User Rating: 1 )
by ktbugg on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:03:42 PM AEST
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beautiful.... great write... it really deeply describes exactly what you're feeling, i like it a lot...

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