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Array ( [sid] => 140334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Outside Myself [time] => 2008-02-10 13:08:47 [hometext] => It seems like this one came out of A Dream..... Me being the black sheep,outcast staring thru a widow into scenes from my life,but not able to get in,, [bodytext] => " Outside Myself"

The fear is awake
again,
and it's aching
inside,
harsh reality
takes me
by surprise
and I'm
looking in
from the
outside,
Bare feet
wearing
pajama's
and it starts
pouring down
rain,
I'm freezing,
my clothes
are soaked,
and yet
in this spot
I remain,
Staring
into A
scene
that can
never be
lived again,
A scene
that shows
how my
life has
Adapted to
and
Accepted
unnecessary
Pain...

Carrying the
Earth
on my
shoulders
with no
way to
Sustain,
or
Obtain
a way to
remain sane...

Subconciously
suppressing
the
Destructive
and
Deceitful
games I
play
on my
own
Brain.......

poetry orig
by:
PepperMint 2/2008 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 357 [topic] => 61 [informant] => InfinitePoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Outside Myself

Contributed by InfinitePoet on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 01:08:47 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

" Outside Myself"

The fear is awake
again,
and it's aching
inside,
harsh reality
takes me
by surprise
and I'm
looking in
from the
outside,
Bare feet
wearing
pajama's
and it starts
pouring down
rain,
I'm freezing,
my clothes
are soaked,
and yet
in this spot
I remain,
Staring
into A
scene
that can
never be
lived again,
A scene
that shows
how my
life has
Adapted to
and
Accepted
unnecessary
Pain...

Carrying the
Earth
on my
shoulders
with no
way to
Sustain,
or
Obtain
a way to
remain sane...

Subconciously
suppressing
the
Destructive
and
Deceitful
games I
play
on my
own
Brain.......

poetry orig
by:
PepperMint 2/2008

Copyright © InfinitePoet ... [ 2008-02-10 13:08:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Outside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 01:53:13 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Incredibly written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Outside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 05:49:44 AM AEST
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Love the style. Love the whole thing actually. I've been living outside myself for a while now...it's tragic.

Re: Outside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 03:29:46 PM AEST
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"Carrying the
Earth
on my
shoulders
with no
way to
Sustain,"
This is my favorite part of the poem...Write more like this and you shall be successful...

Re: Outside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Mando on Thursday, 24th March 2011 @ 02:42:08 AM AEST
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Outstanding write

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