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My Love Is Alive
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 06:03:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am adrift in the sky
on a mighty cloud of love
way up high,
my love is alive...
and beautiful visions
flow
through my mind.
Delicious sensations
have a hold of me
passions
ebb and flow
softly caressing,
I moan and I sway
love has me in a daze.
my soul is on fire
as I slowly
melt
deep into a burning desire,
oh my love is alive
my love is alive.
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2008-02-19 18:03:00]
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Re: My Love Is Alive
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 11:44:16 PM AEST
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this is a very delightful read especially since its morning here.. very uplifting and full of cheer. I especially love the last stanza.. awesome job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: My Love Is Alive
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 01:44:21 PM AEST
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wo, no other words could thrill me more right now.
To hear you happy is joy to my soul.
beautifully written as you do with yo magic pen.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Love Is Alive
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 10:53:04 PM AEST
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excellent expression of what it feels like to be in love.
Tremendously emotive, my friend.
I love how you made love and entity on its own . ..
because ... surely it is. Damn fine poetry.
Beautiful to the last line ~
~Breezy |
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