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Array ( [sid] => 140634 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => we all walk the same [time] => 2008-02-27 08:19:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit here again with only words that are deeply burnt in my soul
problems that persist and boiling have become a shifted fulcrum
times are tipping more towards anger then of peace
rage hidden deep inside making us feel alone in this world
willing to take any means to make our point hurting anyone who gets in our way
a problem but not a solution blood doesn't need to flow to bring change
the time of violence is never a good time screaming or shooting doesn't solve a thing
a comman community does
voices raised together does
taking time to see the world threw someone elses eyes and finding something new
try to find beauty in placement colours in placid waters calm in stormy times
murder has gone up beyond anything we have seen
morals have gone with people wondering why they feel nothing
children die and we still do nothing
are you like me in this world feel like a alien to everyone
no goals like others no drive to be better then everyone else
understanding that happiness doesn't come from a pill
that life is hard and growing up is harder but the past is only that the past
helping others instead of worshipping another human on the screen
do you feel angry at the way people think so self indulged they can't see past their own world
yes I am angry you people don't care I have seen enough death on the screen
more then anyone can handle watching feeling the pain in the street
don't you feel something wrong with you
you look at the sheep and laugh
no one follows we all walk the same [comments] => 2 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 19 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => edited for spelling as requested...mod_6 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
we all walk the same

Contributed by lostrelic on Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 08:19:24 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



I sit here again with only words that are deeply burnt in my soul
problems that persist and boiling have become a shifted fulcrum
times are tipping more towards anger then of peace
rage hidden deep inside making us feel alone in this world
willing to take any means to make our point hurting anyone who gets in our way
a problem but not a solution blood doesn't need to flow to bring change
the time of violence is never a good time screaming or shooting doesn't solve a thing
a comman community does
voices raised together does
taking time to see the world threw someone elses eyes and finding something new
try to find beauty in placement colours in placid waters calm in stormy times
murder has gone up beyond anything we have seen
morals have gone with people wondering why they feel nothing
children die and we still do nothing
are you like me in this world feel like a alien to everyone
no goals like others no drive to be better then everyone else
understanding that happiness doesn't come from a pill
that life is hard and growing up is harder but the past is only that the past
helping others instead of worshipping another human on the screen
do you feel angry at the way people think so self indulged they can't see past their own world
yes I am angry you people don't care I have seen enough death on the screen
more then anyone can handle watching feeling the pain in the street
don't you feel something wrong with you
you look at the sheep and laugh
no one follows we all walk the same




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Re: we all walk the same (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 08:41:57 AM AEST
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wow - awesoem piece! love the anger in your words and your comparisons...morals all gone out the door. Agree with you.


Re: we all walk the same (User Rating: 1 )
by TNSdrummer on Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 08:16:29 AM AEST
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Very strong man. I like your open mind!



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