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Array ( [sid] => 14070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => love [time] => 2003-03-11 06:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You know I think I'm in love with you
but you keep pushing me off
p****g me off
what am I supposed to do?
fade away like all your other problems?
is that all I am just a problem?
something annoying in the back of your mind?
I keep going to guys like this
the ones that treat me bad
I know I deserve better then this
but this is all my life has ever had
bad things and abuse
being pushed in a corner
my mom always just hoped I'd go away
my brother used to beat me senseless everyday
But now I can think and I'm out of that corner
and I'm full of this rage that burns inside
never subsides,
it's always there firey and bright
knowing that I'll never get what I deserve make me mad
but most of all it makes me want to cry
but I cover up my tears with this rage
and now I begin to feel it
and it grow and it burns
consuming the dark corners of my heart
until there's nothing left,
but destruction and pain
I lay here I think about it
think about what my heart used to be
sull of love and hope even though I got hurt
I can't be that anymore
no one feels what I feel
they don't hear these voices screaming echos of pain and dispair in my head
those are my screams and no one cares
this is what love is.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Destiny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
love

Contributed by Destiny on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You know I think I'm in love with you
but you keep pushing me off
p****g me off
what am I supposed to do?
fade away like all your other problems?
is that all I am just a problem?
something annoying in the back of your mind?
I keep going to guys like this
the ones that treat me bad
I know I deserve better then this
but this is all my life has ever had
bad things and abuse
being pushed in a corner
my mom always just hoped I'd go away
my brother used to beat me senseless everyday
But now I can think and I'm out of that corner
and I'm full of this rage that burns inside
never subsides,
it's always there firey and bright
knowing that I'll never get what I deserve make me mad
but most of all it makes me want to cry
but I cover up my tears with this rage
and now I begin to feel it
and it grow and it burns
consuming the dark corners of my heart
until there's nothing left,
but destruction and pain
I lay here I think about it
think about what my heart used to be
sull of love and hope even though I got hurt
I can't be that anymore
no one feels what I feel
they don't hear these voices screaming echos of pain and dispair in my head
those are my screams and no one cares
this is what love is....




Copyright © Destiny ... [ 2003-03-11 06:00:00]
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Re: love (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:35:49 PM AEST
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Hang in there I use to pick those rebels too!
Didnt get me no where! So I changed my choice & find a great man! Good luck Christina


Re: love (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:33:56 AM AEST
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I pretty much date only jerks and I've given up on getting a great guy it's not going to happen for me.....


Re: love (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:33:35 AM AEST
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waht a strong write ... well expressed ..dont give up
tahnx for sharing ths one

peace be your journey
terry




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