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Array ( [sid] => 140977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Window [time] => 2008-03-14 04:46:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The solitary piece of heaven which peers through my window,
Weaves dreams of the scornful sun and the lashing rain,
And I hold on to these frame'd delusions to consider,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of my window!

With reflections traversing but not afar the Alps,
You stare at a million specks nearby,
An auburn tree waiting desolately on the brilliant snow,
A tiny frame of the world in its own colourful glow!

And as you sieve through the moments that make up your life,
Stifling visions to match the contours of the edge,
You wonder what name to christen your world with,
Is it Heaven, earth or Heaven on earth?

But when the enchanted dusk paints the sky in crimson,
You strain your ears to hear the cries of those wounded hearts,
And feel the consuming insignificance of,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of your window!

Unfettering yourself from the chains and borders of your own mind,
You sail away on distant voyages to uncharted places,
Ruminating on how one paints the boundaries of countries,
With this infinite image staining the window lens..

Yet unconcerned is my window of religion,
Heedless is it of nationality,
Oblivious of greed and possession,
Is the window to my own tiny world! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 30 [informant] => diba_perfect [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
The Window

Contributed by diba_perfect on Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 04:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



The solitary piece of heaven which peers through my window,
Weaves dreams of the scornful sun and the lashing rain,
And I hold on to these frame'd delusions to consider,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of my window!

With reflections traversing but not afar the Alps,
You stare at a million specks nearby,
An auburn tree waiting desolately on the brilliant snow,
A tiny frame of the world in its own colourful glow!

And as you sieve through the moments that make up your life,
Stifling visions to match the contours of the edge,
You wonder what name to christen your world with,
Is it Heaven, earth or Heaven on earth?

But when the enchanted dusk paints the sky in crimson,
You strain your ears to hear the cries of those wounded hearts,
And feel the consuming insignificance of,
The eternal beauty of the world through the gaze of your window!

Unfettering yourself from the chains and borders of your own mind,
You sail away on distant voyages to uncharted places,
Ruminating on how one paints the boundaries of countries,
With this infinite image staining the window lens..

Yet unconcerned is my window of religion,
Heedless is it of nationality,
Oblivious of greed and possession,
Is the window to my own tiny world!




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Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 14th March 2008 @ 01:30:15 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, powerfull write.
awesome.
huggs,
emy


Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 12:30:45 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written


Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:59:39 AM AEST
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well written..good work..its true that the whole universe can be perceived within the human mind...u only need a sound mind to travel far n beyond


Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 04:01:55 AM AEST
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A beautifully written and strong piece.

I really loved the last stanza. Bravo

Peace

~Shannon


Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 09:18:14 AM AEST
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A very hypnotic and dreamlike quality running through this.
Reminded me of a poem I wrote , which was about the sense of calm I got from my hotel window gazing out to sea on holiday.
Your poem gave me that same contentment

Steve


Re: The Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 09:31:05 AM AEST
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Loved this!! Quite a surreal piece. I loved the imagery in it... Jenni




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