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Array ( [sid] => 141070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die [time] => 2008-03-19 07:23:46 [hometext] => My Life ? :S [bodytext] => Cut, cut, cut
No escape, I have forgot
Everything I used to be
Now nothing is left, don’t you see?

Scream, scream, scream
Nobody hears me, I'm lost in my dream
It is only me, and I’m too afraid to see,
That I’m failing, dying, losing, falling to my knee

Bleed, bleed, bleed
In the cold I find heath
In this miserable reality I got lost
I pay the price that it costs
Wrong in a world that is too right
Nothing helps, and I cannot fight

Die, die, die
For no hope and despair
My fears they cries, and I go higher
Nothing is left of me
That’s what I see!

Cut, scream, bleed and die!
Is it all too late?
Is this my faith?
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Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die

Contributed by BirdUnableTofFy on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 07:23:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cut, cut, cut
No escape, I have forgot
Everything I used to be
Now nothing is left, don’t you see?

Scream, scream, scream
Nobody hears me, I'm lost in my dream
It is only me, and I’m too afraid to see,
That I’m failing, dying, losing, falling to my knee

Bleed, bleed, bleed
In the cold I find heath
In this miserable reality I got lost
I pay the price that it costs
Wrong in a world that is too right
Nothing helps, and I cannot fight

Die, die, die
For no hope and despair
My fears they cries, and I go higher
Nothing is left of me
That’s what I see!

Cut, scream, bleed and die!
Is it all too late?
Is this my faith?

Copyright Â© BirdUnableTofFy ... [ 2008-03-19 07:23:46]
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Re: Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 07:33:36 AM AEST
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i like the scream part..that is so freaking true..great job

Re: Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Ty6687 on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 11:21:23 AM AEST
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you know i used to feel like that. like no one was listening, no body cared but then i learned that even when i felt like no one was there, God had his eye on me. even if you dont know him he knows you and he loves you

Re: Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazzyfizzle on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:30:54 PM AEST
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great imagery..when your reading you can feel all the emotion. great job

Re: Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die (User Rating: 1 )
by kissingsolitude on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 04:40:21 PM AEST
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intense write, i feel 'ya.......been there before. not such a fun place to be.

Re: Cut, Scream, Bleed and Die (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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This is a really good write. I also like the scream scream scream part;keep up the good work.

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