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A timeless sense of Childhood
Happy to be entering the human race
And anything you want to do you could

I see you as my life continues in your eyes
Your image stretched across my mind
To you only death could break our ties
In your happy smile a purpose I can find

I wish to never see a tear escape its home
and a frown to never touch your mouth
on your features my eyes still roam
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Entering The Human Race

Contributed by poetic_punk on Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 03:03:24 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

The smile that spreads across a face
A timeless sense of Childhood
Happy to be entering the human race
And anything you want to do you could

I see you as my life continues in your eyes
Your image stretched across my mind
To you only death could break our ties
In your happy smile a purpose I can find

I wish to never see a tear escape its home
and a frown to never touch your mouth
on your features my eyes still roam
no greater feeling from east to west to north to south

Copyright © poetic_punk ... [ 2008-03-19 15:03:24]
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Re: Entering The Human Race (User Rating: 1 )
by c-los24 on Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 10:26:04 AM AEST
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thats really deep,
my girlfriend is pregnat to,
i hope i get to feel the same way,
that was beatiful

Re: Entering The Human Race (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 01:45:42 PM AEST
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Adorable write made me smile. Concrats and enjoy it!

Michelle

Re: Entering The Human Race (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 05:59:42 PM AEST
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parenthood and a child's innocence described perfectly

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