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"So stop staring at me with those perfect eyes".
They're standing at the top of the cliffs.
A kiss lingers longer then a harsh word.
She holds him by the tips of his fingers.
Pulling him in she looks up to the sky.

He trys to wipe the tears away but they wont stop.
She smiles but it hurts her heart.
He glances back at the sea below him.
The cliff tops have never ment so much to him untill now.

He's crying and she is too.
"It's never like it used to be and it never will"
He looks at and takes a deep breath " But you know i love you?"
She smiles.
"I dont want to be your first love, but rather your last kiss".
They kiss one last time as she lets go off his fingers.
He walks back broken hearted.
He falls. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 48 [informant] => liamleash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cliff Top Conversation.

Contributed by liamleash on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 04:52:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

"Im not perfect".
"So stop staring at me with those perfect eyes".
They're standing at the top of the cliffs.
A kiss lingers longer then a harsh word.
She holds him by the tips of his fingers.
Pulling him in she looks up to the sky.

He trys to wipe the tears away but they wont stop.
She smiles but it hurts her heart.
He glances back at the sea below him.
The cliff tops have never ment so much to him untill now.

He's crying and she is too.
"It's never like it used to be and it never will"
He looks at and takes a deep breath " But you know i love you?"
She smiles.
"I dont want to be your first love, but rather your last kiss".
They kiss one last time as she lets go off his fingers.
He walks back broken hearted.
He falls.

Copyright © liamleash ... [ 2008-03-28 04:52:50]
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Re: Cliff Top Conversation. (User Rating: 1 )
by prabal77 on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 06:06:32 AM AEST
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man it's damn gud..very touching..

gr88 work...

all the best

Re: Cliff Top Conversation. (User Rating: 1 )
by Aysha on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 01:55:31 PM AEST
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That made my eyes tear up!!!
good job

Aysha

Re: Cliff Top Conversation. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 03:32:16 PM AEST
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Over all I would say a great job with this. I liked the conversing between two people.. I felt many emotions reading this. I repeat myself often when I say... if I feel it to me that makes it poetry and I felt this.

Michelle

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