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Array ( [sid] => 141229 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hush [time] => 2008-03-28 15:04:17 [hometext] => Thanks to my Crow for some idea *smiles* [bodytext] => The first blushes of dawn softly creeps
through breeze parted lace curtains
making its way to sneak silent
into satin sheets scented with lilac.

My lover waits between dreams and dawns break.

Spring dances outside the window
beckoning rebirth and newness
a start to something refreshing
like the showers that cling dew mist to the vine.

We dance in my half parted dreams in rains melody.

Newness of our love twined together
we surrender to the dawn,
Embracing remembrance of fading stars
the song of our hearts in tune with blushing dawns.

In my waking moments I still feel you in my soul.

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Hush

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 03:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The first blushes of dawn softly creeps
through breeze parted lace curtains
making its way to sneak silent
into satin sheets scented with lilac.

My lover waits between dreams and dawns break.

Spring dances outside the window
beckoning rebirth and newness
a start to something refreshing
like the showers that cling dew mist to the vine.

We dance in my half parted dreams in rains melody.

Newness of our love twined together
we surrender to the dawn,
Embracing remembrance of fading stars
the song of our hearts in tune with blushing dawns.

In my waking moments I still feel you in my soul.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-03-28 15:04:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 03:43:21 PM AEST
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Very romantic indeed...beautifully penned.

with lots of love and respect.
FRANCO.

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 03:03:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful sentiment can be found in these words. I truly enjoyed the read.

Absolutely loved this line

"We dance in my half parted dreams in rains melody."

Peace

~Shannon

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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beautiful my friend

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 29th March 2008 @ 05:42:04 PM AEST
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ooh
love the way you flow.

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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Oh my Michelle, my, my, my MICHELLE!!!! This is so damn romantic, and beautiful
and gorgeous, and softly alluring and so many other adjectives that describe the
melting of a heart within a heart!! DAMN GIRL! I think this is my brand new favourite
of yours! I love it!! I love the word choices, the feel of it, the beauty surrounding it, just
the whole glow of everything IT!

Beautiful, beautiful writing hun! ^_^

~Breezy

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by hostile_waffle on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 09:51:00 PM AEST
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I can actually see this happening in my mind. Absolutely wonderful, great talent.

♥Alix

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