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Array ( [sid] => 14123 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => earthquake of distress [time] => 2003-03-12 00:40:00 [hometext] => please note, this is not about another woman... the trials of everyday life can be very difficult... somedays, the only way for me to cope is to write... everyday in my life is a gift, even if the past threatens to destroy it... thank you letting me share here... in this space where poets come together... [bodytext] => my insides have been hit with an earthquake
thoughts of my love make my lungs shake
fear and disbelief
(you know about this thief)
can it happen again? shall my heart break?

please don't ever go there again
this demon, it isn't your friend
anger and sadness
(do you remember the madness?)
comfortably numb, that's the end

please don't leave those that love you
our hearts are breaking right in two
depression and guilt
(you'll lose all that you've built)
oh god, what are we going to do?

please heed this plea and calling
if you can't or won't, you'll be falling
shiver and shake
(keep going and you'll break)
the ghosts of your past, they are brawling

i'm so scared, dear love of my life
filled with pain and sorrow and strife
anxiety and love
(remember thoughts of your dove)
don't desert your true love... it's your wife [comments] => 6 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
earthquake of distress

Contributed by LadyDama on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



my insides have been hit with an earthquake
thoughts of my love make my lungs shake
fear and disbelief
(you know about this thief)
can it happen again? shall my heart break?

please don't ever go there again
this demon, it isn't your friend
anger and sadness
(do you remember the madness?)
comfortably numb, that's the end

please don't leave those that love you
our hearts are breaking right in two
depression and guilt
(you'll lose all that you've built)
oh god, what are we going to do?

please heed this plea and calling
if you can't or won't, you'll be falling
shiver and shake
(keep going and you'll break)
the ghosts of your past, they are brawling

i'm so scared, dear love of my life
filled with pain and sorrow and strife
anxiety and love
(remember thoughts of your dove)
don't desert your true love... it's your wife




Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-03-12 00:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:43:45 AM AEST
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again, lady....a masterpiece... I'm so sorry its not going too well...i hope everything works out for the best


Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:58:19 AM AEST
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a good descriptive write, feeling your anxiety...thank you for sharing
rosie


Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 01:10:03 AM AEST
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Oh! God, this touches my heart, noo, this is moving me to tears, haunted by past and the distress that is erupting in your sacred heart.!
O dear Lady I weep for you. I cry for you not tomorrow. today, yes today,.. with tears.. venkat


Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:50:20 AM AEST
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Painfully emotional write .....I wish you the best... :o) Larry


Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 10:29:49 AM AEST
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awww...im so sorry your having so much pain, by your comment before the poem, you are right, your not alone, here are many who care about each other who write their souls on paper so their minds can rest, and we will be there for you, my heart is with you, big love and a big hugg, your friend nessa


Re: earthquake of distress (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:50:37 AM AEST
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thank you for sharing with us here! i hope you find your peace, girl. every day truely is a gift and i'm glad you see it!




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