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[title] => ~The Right Choice~
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~~*~~
I see the pain in your eyes,
The pain you try so hard to disguise.
I hear the hurt in your voice,
‘Did I make the right choice?’
I can’t imagine what you feel
But I know that your pain is real.
I see the sadness on your face,
And wish that joy would take its place.
I look at you and I feel so sorry.
With each passing day all I do is worry.
I know you can't turn back the hands of time
But my friend, life isn’t always sublime.
You don’t have to face it alone
And I’m sure you must have known
That I’ll be here for you once more
Just like I was there for you before.
~~*~~
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~The Right Choice~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~~*~~
I see the pain in your eyes,
The pain you try so hard to disguise.
I hear the hurt in your voice,
‘Did I make the right choice?’
I can’t imagine what you feel
But I know that your pain is real.
I see the sadness on your face,
And wish that joy would take its place.
I look at you and I feel so sorry.
With each passing day all I do is worry.
I know you can't turn back the hands of time
But my friend, life isn’t always sublime.
You don’t have to face it alone
And I’m sure you must have known
That I’ll be here for you once more
Just like I was there for you before.
~~*~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-04-04 11:27:03]
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:32:56 AM AEST
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Beautifully put, Jenni. And it's wonderful to see the loyalty here.
In a world where loyalties are bent and ofttimes broken, we all need
the hope and beauty that lives inside your poem.
Gorgeous write!
~Breezy
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:07:27 PM AEST
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I mirror Rox here. This is most beautiful and you have not lost a bit of your writing talent my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 12:18:41 PM AEST
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wow this is such a beautiful write for a friend.. so powerful and empathetic.. I loved it.. very expressive great job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by whome on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 02:20:15 PM AEST
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I know the feeling from both sides.
So Gloriously witten.
I wish you a Beautiful day and a Golden Week ahead of you. |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 09:51:21 PM AEST
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| Hi Jenni, Awesome write as always. Shows the kindness of your soul and tenderness of your heart. ( As if we didn't know already)...Sigh, if only we had the power to take others pain away...Good to see you as always...Russ |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 06:28:42 AM AEST
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| very beautifully written |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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There is real artistry at work here, thanks for sharing this with us all.
Beauitful
Steve |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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Sis,
I see you have rejuvented and time makes life more tender.
Bet all your students are happy to see you back on the personal level.
You've come so far and life does get better between the times of pain then joy awaits us.
You writing is magnifying your deep soul.
tis definete joy to have you home.
always luv, smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 11:18:15 AM AEST
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Kind words of wisdom, A friendly smile, and a shoulder when it is needed. TRUE FRIENDS are special people indeed. Super piece.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 03:06:20 PM AEST
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so beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by diba_perfect on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 08:57:54 AM AEST
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| very very beautiful a write..ur choice of words rock..so simple yet so powerful.. |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by xxILoveTheSilencexx on
Saturday, 19th April 2008 @ 10:07:56 AM AEST
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very very good.....I loved it.
=)
good job |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 11:04:54 AM AEST
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| a fluid microcosm of a kind heart, this is what friendship is all about. poetry of a very high standard. |
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Re: ~The Right Choice~
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 08:47:45 PM AEST
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Jenni,
You know I have always enjoyed your writes my friend. I have missed reading your beautiful poetry. Well done. :o) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Cynthia |
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