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Array ( [sid] => 141387 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out of Focus [time] => 2008-04-05 07:49:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Once upon a time
you were in my arms
even it it was only
in my dreams.

I watch as you get hurt
time after time
yet all I've ever been
to you
is a helpful word
and a shoulder
to cry on.

With every heartache
of yours,
my heart breaks
a little.

I feel as if I am
fading fast...
You're loosing focus
on me and what I could do
to help you be
truely happy.

Why can't you see that we
are perfect for one another?

We are the two halves
of one soul
but you decide
to remain
half empty.

If you wait too long
I will be nothing
but an evanescent flicker
of a thought
locked away in your
memory.

It breaks my heart
to let you out of it.

Until you finally
see me...
All I can do
is continue to dream... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 33 [informant] => night_goddess666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Out of Focus

Contributed by night_goddess666 on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 07:49:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Once upon a time
you were in my arms
even it it was only
in my dreams.

I watch as you get hurt
time after time
yet all I've ever been
to you
is a helpful word
and a shoulder
to cry on.

With every heartache
of yours,
my heart breaks
a little.

I feel as if I am
fading fast...
You're loosing focus
on me and what I could do
to help you be
truely happy.

Why can't you see that we
are perfect for one another?

We are the two halves
of one soul
but you decide
to remain
half empty.

If you wait too long
I will be nothing
but an evanescent flicker
of a thought
locked away in your
memory.

It breaks my heart
to let you out of it.

Until you finally
see me...
All I can do
is continue to dream...

Copyright © night_goddess666 ... [ 2008-04-05 07:49:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Out of Focus (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 5th April 2008 @ 07:55:26 AM AEST
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Well this one came at me like an express train and swept me along in its wake of emotion.
I'm glad I stayed for the journey

Steve

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