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Array ( [sid] => 141486 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Talkin To Myself. [time] => 2008-04-10 00:00:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How are you?
I'm fine thanks
And you?
I'm sad
And angry too
Like you care
No really I do
That's not true
I'm tired of playing the fool
What are you talking about
I'm talking about how you treat me so cruel
Stop pretending like everything's okay
Why don't you just shut up and go away
It's all your fault I feel this way
It's all your fault my skies are gray
I don't know what to say
Of course you don't
You never do
Just sit there acting like you have no clue
I don't know what your talking about
YES YOU DO!
Well you don't have to shout
There's no other way to make you understand
Make you see what you do to me
This is never how I wanted it to be
Well you could have fooled me
Don't say that
Well it's true
Look at all the shi* you put me through
Please don't cry
I can't help it
Sometimes it hurts so bad I want to die
You broke my heart and didn't care
And when I need you most you were never there
All those nights that I longed for your touch
You have no idea
I've missed you much
I've missed you too
No you haven't
How much lying are you going to do?
I loved you more than life itself
And you broke my heart into a thousand pieces
And left me there to pick them all up myself
You tossed me aside like a piece of dirt
Never looked back
Never cared how much it hurt
I'm sorry
No your not
You just tell lie after lie
And for what?
Whats the reason why?
I said I was sorry
And I said you were lying
All you ever do is hurt me
So what's the point in even trying
That's it I'm done
Because just like always
This is a conversation of one...
I'm just talkin to myself.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Talkin To Myself.

Contributed by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 12:00:13 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



How are you?
I'm fine thanks
And you?
I'm sad
And angry too
Like you care
No really I do
That's not true
I'm tired of playing the fool
What are you talking about
I'm talking about how you treat me so cruel
Stop pretending like everything's okay
Why don't you just shut up and go away
It's all your fault I feel this way
It's all your fault my skies are gray
I don't know what to say
Of course you don't
You never do
Just sit there acting like you have no clue
I don't know what your talking about
YES YOU DO!
Well you don't have to shout
There's no other way to make you understand
Make you see what you do to me
This is never how I wanted it to be
Well you could have fooled me
Don't say that
Well it's true
Look at all the shi* you put me through
Please don't cry
I can't help it
Sometimes it hurts so bad I want to die
You broke my heart and didn't care
And when I need you most you were never there
All those nights that I longed for your touch
You have no idea
I've missed you much
I've missed you too
No you haven't
How much lying are you going to do?
I loved you more than life itself
And you broke my heart into a thousand pieces
And left me there to pick them all up myself
You tossed me aside like a piece of dirt
Never looked back
Never cared how much it hurt
I'm sorry
No your not
You just tell lie after lie
And for what?
Whats the reason why?
I said I was sorry
And I said you were lying
All you ever do is hurt me
So what's the point in even trying
That's it I'm done
Because just like always
This is a conversation of one...
I'm just talkin to myself.




Copyright © Bleedthelove ... [ 2008-04-10 00:00:13]
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Re: Talkin To Myself. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 03:31:14 PM AEST
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wow this is a very expressive write full of anger and frustration and hurt rolled into one.. if one person can hurt you so much to tear you like this.. they aren't worth loving in the first place.. but this is a beautiful poem..

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: Talkin To Myself. (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 12:04:58 AM AEST
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I agree with vampyress, anybody who can hurt you that bad you shouldn't bother loving. I can feel so much frustration in this poem, beautifully written.




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