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To slip back now is something that deep inside I dread
From time to time I get the urge to re-sow that evil seed
Deep inside I get the the feeling that I will always have this need

Still I long to drag one back and satisfy the urge
But it is a need that for some time I've tried to purge
I wish i could forget about these deadly cancer sticks
I feel the need to have one more and get my precious fix

Were it not for new life i never would have quit
You can not know what its like unless you need a hit
Upon my weakened mind these strong dark cravings feed
Unless you yourself have quit before you will never feel the need
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The Needing 2

Contributed by Poetic_punk on Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 09:59:41 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A few months on and the cravings are all but dead
To slip back now is something that deep inside I dread
From time to time I get the urge to re-sow that evil seed
Deep inside I get the the feeling that I will always have this need

Still I long to drag one back and satisfy the urge
But it is a need that for some time I've tried to purge
I wish i could forget about these deadly cancer sticks
I feel the need to have one more and get my precious fix

Were it not for new life i never would have quit
You can not know what its like unless you need a hit
Upon my weakened mind these strong dark cravings feed
Unless you yourself have quit before you will never feel the need

Copyright © Poetic_punk ... [ 2008-04-22 09:59:41]
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Re: The Needing 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Tuesday, 22nd April 2008 @ 10:21:42 PM AEST
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Alright! Give those cigarettes up. I myself had enjoyed smoking - took some doing, but I gave them them up 22 years ago. Feel much better.

Good write.

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