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Array ( [sid] => 141814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Spent It On Neons [time] => 2008-04-23 17:10:35 [hometext] => some Vandals-inspired writing [bodytext] => Don’t have much to say
Except go to hell and eat some hay.
Listen to some Bach and _____.
Just nothing that’s been a hit.

Shh, be quiet, the movie’s playing.
And hopefully my girlfriend will be staying.
She’s got enough money to get me through the week
And I need her so I don’t end up in the street.
Plus she’s kinda hot too.

Let’s go back to the playground.
It was so much more fun than the underground.
When we were still on solid ground
And I wasn’t being chased by a bloodhound.

I was seven and still free
To play candyland just for me.
Chutes and Ladders with the buds,
A bubble bath with tons of suds.

Now I stock shelves at 7/11
And work way past seven and eleven.
While we’re all so far from heaven,
And Jose gets off the same time as Melvin.

I got my refund check in the mail
Gonna go spend it on my next bail.
Or maybe a new set of neons for my neon.
Or just a new sycamore tree to pee on.

Let’s go back to the playground.
It was so much more fun than the underground.
When we were still on solid ground
And I wasn’t being chased by a bloodhound.

_______, my life sucks,
It’s not even worth 10 bucks.
Hand me a ______ beer. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 529 [topic] => 58 [informant] => a7x36 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => limericks )

I Spent It On Neons

Contributed by a7x36 on Wednesday, 23rd April 2008 @ 05:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic: limericks

Don’t have much to say
Except go to hell and eat some hay.
Listen to some Bach and _____.
Just nothing that’s been a hit.

Shh, be quiet, the movie’s playing.
And hopefully my girlfriend will be staying.
She’s got enough money to get me through the week
And I need her so I don’t end up in the street.
Plus she’s kinda hot too.

Let’s go back to the playground.
It was so much more fun than the underground.
When we were still on solid ground
And I wasn’t being chased by a bloodhound.

I was seven and still free
To play candyland just for me.
Chutes and Ladders with the buds,
A bubble bath with tons of suds.

Now I stock shelves at 7/11
And work way past seven and eleven.
While we’re all so far from heaven,
And Jose gets off the same time as Melvin.

I got my refund check in the mail
Gonna go spend it on my next bail.
Or maybe a new set of neons for my neon.
Or just a new sycamore tree to pee on.

Let’s go back to the playground.
It was so much more fun than the underground.
When we were still on solid ground
And I wasn’t being chased by a bloodhound.

_______, my life sucks,
It’s not even worth 10 bucks.
Hand me a ______ beer.

Copyright Â© a7x36 ... [ 2008-04-23 17:10:35]
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Re: I Spent It On Neons (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 24th April 2008 @ 03:34:08 AM AEST
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I liked it man, it is a decent write.

Re: I Spent It On Neons (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:58:05 AM AEST
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The Vandals are the perfect inspiration
for a good write. Perfect irony and they
don't take things too seriously. I like your title and it would make a good punk rock song.
good stuff

Re: I Spent It On Neons (User Rating: 1 )
by kismetkills on Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 12:54:32 AM AEST
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lol plus she's kinda hot too.
nice one

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