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Array ( [sid] => 141884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain Remains [time] => 2008-04-26 14:28:18 [hometext] => One of the many poems that I wrote after the one I truly loved left me. [bodytext] => There are times when pleasure turns to pain,
You try to rise like the Phoenix only ashes remain.
I wish I could be like the Bald White to soar the sky,
That’s determined to live and unafraid to die.

Why can't I think of something other than this pain?
Caused by the woman who left, now only memories remain.
It was like dropping without a chute from the sky,
Or stuck between the jaws of the Great White waiting to die.

Will talking about pain take away my pain?
Well that's what I wonder but I know it will remain.
It'll stay until the Herculean stars from the sky,
Come rocketing towards the earth burning out to die.

Now I console myself that no more of this pain,
will torment the pieces of my heart that remain.
I'm sure God will send me an angel from the sky,
With Love to last, at least until the day I die.
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Pain Remains

Contributed by Vic on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 02:28:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

There are times when pleasure turns to pain,
You try to rise like the Phoenix only ashes remain.
I wish I could be like the Bald White to soar the sky,
That’s determined to live and unafraid to die.

Why can't I think of something other than this pain?
Caused by the woman who left, now only memories remain.
It was like dropping without a chute from the sky,
Or stuck between the jaws of the Great White waiting to die.

Will talking about pain take away my pain?
Well that's what I wonder but I know it will remain.
It'll stay until the Herculean stars from the sky,
Come rocketing towards the earth burning out to die.

Now I console myself that no more of this pain,
will torment the pieces of my heart that remain.
I'm sure God will send me an angel from the sky,
With Love to last, at least until the day I die.

Copyright Â© Vic ... [ 2008-04-26 14:28:18]
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Re: Pain Remains (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 02:31:27 PM AEST
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Wow..such a sad write..but so beautifully written...It is said that pain brings out the best in a poet....this proves it to be true..
Jenni

Re: Pain Remains (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 02:36:40 PM AEST
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Emotional write here, very well written and I hope that things turn around for you. Let the pain float away.

Michelle

Re: Pain Remains (User Rating: 1 )
by Alex23 on Saturday, 26th April 2008 @ 05:31:18 PM AEST
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I couldn't have commented better.
Very well-written, very emotional.

Re: Pain Remains (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 08:47:42 AM AEST
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the stars from the sky, come rocketing to the earth burning out to die? wow! good poem, great thoughts..

Re: Pain Remains (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:35:00 PM AEST
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I certainly feel every word here.
smiles,
emy

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