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[aid] => mick
[title] => Doomed Love, Destiny Foretold
[time] => 2008-04-26 20:13:22
[hometext] => I wrote this last year...This is by far the darkest piece I have ever written.
[bodytext] => Two lovers met among the stars Walking hand in hand watching waves break against distant sand bars Double sets of footprints follow a set path next to the ocean Love becomes the person; no longer a feeling, no longer an emotion During an annual celebration what a beautiful night In a gown of scarlet satin and white lace, what a heavenly sight Dancing and laughter followed wherever she went An angel she was, that was Heaven sent Midnight came and with it a nightmare Into their bedroom a demon came, her life he would not spare Holding her spirit in the palm of his hand Ever so slightly making her bleed, sending piece by piece to Satan’s holy land To her true love she yelled out his name To look into his eyes, empty, he was no longer the same Soulless, a walking corpse Amazing how with the taste of blood how the mind warps Laying her down upon the floor in hands and ankles four blades find a new home As the blood begins to flow the waxed floor turns scarlet chrome Crimson thoughts run along the floor as her life begins to flow Now feeling no pain as his hatred continues to grow Rolling her over upon her stomach the blade begins to slice the skin Starting at the top of the head, following down the spine seeing what lies within Working down the back of the arms, the back of the legs At each of the corners knives acting like tent pegs Around her wrists and ankles, leaving her hands and feet All the cuts aren’t jagged but surgically precise and neat Making the necessary cuts in order to remove her body’s sheath Getting intoxicated from the taste of her blood as well as the sight of the corpse that lies beneath No more piercing screams to try to shatter an unfeeling heart With hell’s fire in his eyes, her body and skin he rips them apart Her lifeless corpse swimming in an ocean of her blood upon the floor He walks away to hang her skin as a veil above the door Walking back to the beauty that once was, the demon bid her love adieu The entire time, of his actions her love hadn’t a clue Thinking that he heard her sobbing when they were his own cries Picking up the blade from the floor he began gouging out his eyes Within his heart the blade found it eternal resting place As crimson tears ran down his cheeks and falling from his face Upon her bloody remains he came to rest after he fell Knowing nothing else than what he had just seen, he releases his final yell Clammy and cold he awakes from his horrid scream Looking around and seeing her next to him, he realizes it was all a dream 2007 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 13 [informant] => farscape_prophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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