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Array ( [sid] => 141915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => New Foundation [time] => 2008-04-27 16:12:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You're my foundation to this new frame of mind i have
You've opened me up
I've never knew there could be another female that i could influence with comments and advice that are almost meaningless to myself
You're sensitive and emotional just like me
That nearly scares me because you remind me so much of myself and other people who I'm constantly around
It's like talking to myself in the mirror and getting frustrated with the answers I'm giving and how I'm acting
I'm weirdly attracted to you
You're personality blows my mind away and draws me closer to you
No matter how many times I say how you get on my nerves
How annoying you can be
How you just won't shut up
How you want so much attention
I always catch myself waiting for you to call or text back
You're are the beginning of something that i would have never thought was meant to be
I didn't know one little text would bring us to where we are now
You've gotten attached to me so fast
it makes me question myself
Not in a bad way but I'm finding out so much about why i act certain ways with certain people
With every little kiss that is senseless to me, I feel you opening up more and it means a lot to you
I'm kinda afraid that you'll want more and I'll stop wanting
It isn't my intentions to hurt anyone's feelings
I'm not promising forever or loving memories
I'm promising pain, unhappiness, and a lifetime of memories that you were my first
The only one who had me thinking all girls are the same
You've opened me up to see more in 4 weeks than any other male I've ever encountered
You have so much pressure on you already and i don't wanna be another negative addition to your life
And even if after you feel I just might not be that chick
I want you to know you've gained and never lost
And I gave just enough [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => akakin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
New Foundation

Contributed by akakin on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 04:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You're my foundation to this new frame of mind i have
You've opened me up
I've never knew there could be another female that i could influence with comments and advice that are almost meaningless to myself
You're sensitive and emotional just like me
That nearly scares me because you remind me so much of myself and other people who I'm constantly around
It's like talking to myself in the mirror and getting frustrated with the answers I'm giving and how I'm acting
I'm weirdly attracted to you
You're personality blows my mind away and draws me closer to you
No matter how many times I say how you get on my nerves
How annoying you can be
How you just won't shut up
How you want so much attention
I always catch myself waiting for you to call or text back
You're are the beginning of something that i would have never thought was meant to be
I didn't know one little text would bring us to where we are now
You've gotten attached to me so fast
it makes me question myself
Not in a bad way but I'm finding out so much about why i act certain ways with certain people
With every little kiss that is senseless to me, I feel you opening up more and it means a lot to you
I'm kinda afraid that you'll want more and I'll stop wanting
It isn't my intentions to hurt anyone's feelings
I'm not promising forever or loving memories
I'm promising pain, unhappiness, and a lifetime of memories that you were my first
The only one who had me thinking all girls are the same
You've opened me up to see more in 4 weeks than any other male I've ever encountered
You have so much pressure on you already and i don't wanna be another negative addition to your life
And even if after you feel I just might not be that chick
I want you to know you've gained and never lost
And I gave just enough




Copyright © akakin ... [ 2008-04-27 16:12:17]
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Re: New Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_blue on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 01:31:49 AM AEST
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wow, a very expressive write. nice work


Re: New Foundation (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 12:29:01 PM AEST
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Deep and honest..I like this..
Jenni




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