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Array ( [sid] => 141957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Lover's song [time] => 2008-04-29 06:40:40 [hometext] => I've also put music to this write and it's one of the songs my friends wish to listen to over and over again. [bodytext] => Sittin all by myself
In a room without a light
My guitar she whispers softly
I’ll make everything alright

Tears roll down my face
It’s my heart deep down inside
I could run from this life I have
But I can never hide

Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We don’t live forever
So let me live before I go

I think about tomorrow
But my past is here to haunt
We may not always get
Everything that we want

The sun has set, there’s a gentle breeze
And the birds sing out their songs
Giving me new hope to see
That life must carry on

Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We don’t live forever
So let me live before I go

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Vic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
The Lover's song

Contributed by Vic on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:40:40 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Sittin all by myself
In a room without a light
My guitar she whispers softly
I’ll make everything alright

Tears roll down my face
It’s my heart deep down inside
I could run from this life I have
But I can never hide

Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We don’t live forever
So let me live before I go

I think about tomorrow
But my past is here to haunt
We may not always get
Everything that we want

The sun has set, there’s a gentle breeze
And the birds sing out their songs
Giving me new hope to see
That life must carry on

Life without a lover
Is like a morn without the sun and I know
We don’t live forever
So let me live before I go





Copyright © Vic ... [ 2008-04-29 06:40:40]
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Re: The Lover's song (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:54:30 AM AEST
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This is so true...too bad we can't post audio, because I'd love to hear it. When we lose our best friend or lover the days are so gray and all we want is to run away from everything. Good write, I bet it's a phenomenal song.


Re: The Lover's song (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 07:28:23 AM AEST
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A wise write so touching and yes I think a beautiful song.

It can be lonely at times without that special someone near.

Hope things are going better your way.

Michelle


Re: The Lover's song (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 07:46:00 AM AEST
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Wow..Fantastic!! Maybe we can hear it some day. I have heard a couple songs here recently from MajesticPoet.. so perhaps you can liaise with him and post your song here also.....
Jenni


Re: The Lover's song (User Rating: 1 )
by breezyweezy on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 11:02:42 AM AEST
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this is a great write, the best ive readin a while, i'm a little young and i dont kno the tru meaning of being in love but the way you described life without one, it seems like a really tough time

i would LOVE to hear this as a song
great job




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