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Array ( [sid] => 142030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Secret notes [time] => 2008-05-01 08:05:27 [hometext] => Theres two poems to this series like her veiw and his. this is hers. [bodytext] => Does he not see how these dark nights
Made them grow into the solitude of one?
Wringing his hands in dispair
What has he done?
Monstrous evil
Villainous good
Together they would pluck kisses from the others lips
As though with out them they would die
Dead in each others arms
All lies would burn away
Alas the sweet nobal man
And the unfaithful shrew
He who would stand golden in virtue
She who would dance with a smile in hell
Following the winds of fate of spirit
She waits at his door
Till such a time that he chooses
To be swallowed by the passion eating his heart
She will wait. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 32 [informant] => anesthetic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Secret notes

Contributed by anesthetic on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 08:05:27 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Does he not see how these dark nights
Made them grow into the solitude of one?
Wringing his hands in dispair
What has he done?
Monstrous evil
Villainous good
Together they would pluck kisses from the others lips
As though with out them they would die
Dead in each others arms
All lies would burn away
Alas the sweet nobal man
And the unfaithful shrew
He who would stand golden in virtue
She who would dance with a smile in hell
Following the winds of fate of spirit
She waits at his door
Till such a time that he chooses
To be swallowed by the passion eating his heart
She will wait.

Copyright © anesthetic ... [ 2008-05-01 08:05:27]
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Re: Secret notes (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:29:37 AM AEST
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Very descriptive, overall an interesting write. Nice work.

Re: Secret notes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 1st May 2008 @ 10:55:55 AM AEST
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Wow I relate to this one intense and full of emotion. A good write

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