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Array ( [sid] => 1422 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When Can I Come Home? [time] => 2002-07-30 06:40:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I miss you
So much it hurts
I'm tired of waiting
When can I come home?

You won't speak to me
You won't glance at me
I'm tired of being ignored
When can I come home?

I'm working myself to the max
I'm holding in all of my feelings
I'm tired of being so closed off
When can I come back home?

You found a new job
Won't tell me where it is and what you do
I'm tired of feeling non existent
When can I come home?

I stay home all day
I do nothing but think and cry
I'm tired of not being myself
When can I come home?

You've went on many dates
Keep saying you'll never find the perfect woman
I'm tired of not having a second chance to prove myself
When can I come home?

I said I was sorry
My love for you will never fade
I'm tired of waiting
When can I come home?

Please tell me
I'm begging you
Down on my knees
Tears streaming down my cheeks
Loving you with all my heart
Willing to give up my soul
When can I come home? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Dragons_Of_Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
When Can I Come Home?

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 06:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I miss you
So much it hurts
I'm tired of waiting
When can I come home?

You won't speak to me
You won't glance at me
I'm tired of being ignored
When can I come home?

I'm working myself to the max
I'm holding in all of my feelings
I'm tired of being so closed off
When can I come back home?

You found a new job
Won't tell me where it is and what you do
I'm tired of feeling non existent
When can I come home?

I stay home all day
I do nothing but think and cry
I'm tired of not being myself
When can I come home?

You've went on many dates
Keep saying you'll never find the perfect woman
I'm tired of not having a second chance to prove myself
When can I come home?

I said I was sorry
My love for you will never fade
I'm tired of waiting
When can I come home?

Please tell me
I'm begging you
Down on my knees
Tears streaming down my cheeks
Loving you with all my heart
Willing to give up my soul
When can I come home?




Copyright © Dragons_Of_Rose ... [ 2002-07-30 06:40:55]
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Re: When Can I Come Home? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:43:35 PM AEST
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It hurts when the other needs time.But time is what is needed .
a great write


Re: When Can I Come Home? (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 04:23:22 PM AEST
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Can relate to the feelings in this one...




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