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Then i would be in the sky,
Wouldn't that be grand,
Then i could fly in my frying pan,
I'd go into bed,
And shut my sleepy head,
I'd wake up and have a shower,
Then i would run down stairs with all my power,
I'd dance around,
Then fall on the ground,
Then i'd jump in the sky and fly fly fly......... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 379 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Bluebell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

HOW I WISH I COULD FLY

Contributed by Bluebell on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 02:58:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

How i wish i could fly,
Then i would be in the sky,
Wouldn't that be grand,
Then i could fly in my frying pan,
I'd go into bed,
And shut my sleepy head,
I'd wake up and have a shower,
Then i would run down stairs with all my power,
I'd dance around,
Then fall on the ground,
Then i'd jump in the sky and fly fly fly.........

Copyright © Bluebell ... [ 2008-05-11 02:58:30]
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Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 03:14:20 AM AEST
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Hey welcome to the site! I really enjoyed your first poem..I looking forward to reading many more from you..must admit though i don't shut my head when i go to bed but whatever works for you!!!

Puppy :)

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 04:14:44 AM AEST
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good write but you should change "And shut my sleepy head. To "And rest my sleepy head.
but whatever I liked but just a suggestion

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by memey on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 06:50:05 AM AEST
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Well done.. I like ur poem :)

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 08:53:52 AM AEST
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i liked it a poem can be whatever you want it to be rhyming or not

and dont change that line its what makes it your poem

plus i liked it coz u do shut of ya head like haha x

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 10:32:31 PM AEST
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Hey..I really enjoyed reading this whimsical poem of yours. Good work. It gave the reader a sense of freedom....
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by PlainFreshRain on Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 10:13:43 PM AEST
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Hey Sis,

Love your first poem "Bluebell"!
YOUR SO FULL OF ENERGY!

Conal

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 09:14:07 PM AEST
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Hey!
Good work!
Keep it up-so fresha and free!
Beth

Re: HOW I WISH I COULD FLY (User Rating: 1 )
by onyx on Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 02:19:53 AM AEST
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this ones really good!

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