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Everything you've done to me
Hushed upon my lips in vain
Wishing you could feel such pain
Choking on my dying speech
Practice only what you preach

My eyes are swollen; lips are numb
My heart grows cold, but it's just begun
The needles stick
The clock's hands tick
Time and space and far between
This war is killing you and me

With hands gripped tight
You beg to fight
I walk away in my own resolve
With steady fingers
These words will linger
Until the world cannot revolve

Laying empty on this bedside
Wishing I could puke
I grip the sheets and close my eyes
Til all I see is you

This consummation of my thoughts
Brought only by a single word
Is everything that you are not
But the reality remains unheard [comments] => 5 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 22 [informant] => satanssecret1369 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Insomnia

Contributed by satanssecret1369 on Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 02:32:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The world will never see
Everything you've done to me
Hushed upon my lips in vain
Wishing you could feel such pain
Choking on my dying speech
Practice only what you preach

My eyes are swollen; lips are numb
My heart grows cold, but it's just begun
The needles stick
The clock's hands tick
Time and space and far between
This war is killing you and me

With hands gripped tight
You beg to fight
I walk away in my own resolve
With steady fingers
These words will linger
Until the world cannot revolve

Laying empty on this bedside
Wishing I could puke
I grip the sheets and close my eyes
Til all I see is you

This consummation of my thoughts
Brought only by a single word
Is everything that you are not
But the reality remains unheard

Copyright © satanssecret1369 ... [ 2008-05-15 14:32:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 02:35:27 PM AEST
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The word deep comes to mind when reading this.

The consummation of my thoughts...... I liked that line.

I feel anger deeply embedded in this write, nice flow as well. Over all I like

Michelle

Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 03:13:59 AM AEST
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This is very deep...you did a wonderful job...The whole piece flowed nicely together.

Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 06:33:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. This captures the emotions perfectly.

Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 05:36:27 PM AEST
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Beautifully written! Nice poem!

-Butch Corpuz

Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by HonestInk on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 10:19:31 AM AEST
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I like the anger that shows through your lines..nice write!!

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