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It was too changeable
Contributed by
holy
on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 06:35:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It was too changeable
When I was on my way home
it started raining again
I had to wait up
"If only the rain would stop raining."
I was in a very expectation and prayed it would stop
It was about half past six in the afternoon
it always took me about half hour to walk from the factory to my home
"If I push forward
I can get home before dark."
I said to myself
Looked around me
there were lots of people stopping
"It was too changeable in this season,
I should take an umbrella just a precaution from home."
do you know?
today I am still sure
at that moment my head was full of you
Suddenly
there was a crash of thunder
then the storm struck
many bicycles standing on the way fell into the rain
"I will have to stay for a long time."
I were struck by the sudden realization
How nice
unexpectedly
the rain let up quickly
"Thank you my rain,
much talk little action!"
I smiled to went my way through the crowd
It was very quiet all night
but my heart was very unquiet
I knew those were signs of an uneasy mind
Of course
I have known both of grife and happiness
I also believed that I understood you very much
but I didn't know of anything to prevent me from doing so
"Maybe I will be able to tell when I am very old."
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holy
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2008-05-17 18:35:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It was too changeable
(User Rating: 1 ) by ratty on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 09:44:03 AM AEST (User
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I must admit that I find your writing the best I have read since being on this site. It spoke to me the most........ |
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