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Array ( [sid] => 142449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It was too changeable [time] => 2008-05-17 18:35:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It was too changeable



When I was on my way home

it started raining again

I had to wait up

"If only the rain would stop raining."

I was in a very expectation and prayed it would stop



It was about half past six in the afternoon

it always took me about half hour to walk from the factory to my home

"If I push forward

I can get home before dark."

I said to myself



Looked around me

there were lots of people stopping

"It was too changeable in this season,

I should take an umbrella just a precaution from home."

do you know?

today I am still sure

at that moment my head was full of you



Suddenly

there was a crash of thunder

then the storm struck

many bicycles standing on the way fell into the rain

"I will have to stay for a long time."

I were struck by the sudden realization



How nice

unexpectedly

the rain let up quickly

"Thank you my rain,

much talk little action!"

I smiled to went my way through the crowd



It was very quiet all night

but my heart was very unquiet

I knew those were signs of an uneasy mind

Of course

I have known both of grife and happiness

I also believed that I understood you very much

but I didn't know of anything to prevent me from doing so

"Maybe I will be able to tell when I am very old."
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
It was too changeable

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 06:35:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It was too changeable



When I was on my way home

it started raining again

I had to wait up

"If only the rain would stop raining."

I was in a very expectation and prayed it would stop



It was about half past six in the afternoon

it always took me about half hour to walk from the factory to my home

"If I push forward

I can get home before dark."

I said to myself



Looked around me

there were lots of people stopping

"It was too changeable in this season,

I should take an umbrella just a precaution from home."

do you know?

today I am still sure

at that moment my head was full of you



Suddenly

there was a crash of thunder

then the storm struck

many bicycles standing on the way fell into the rain

"I will have to stay for a long time."

I were struck by the sudden realization



How nice

unexpectedly

the rain let up quickly

"Thank you my rain,

much talk little action!"

I smiled to went my way through the crowd



It was very quiet all night

but my heart was very unquiet

I knew those were signs of an uneasy mind

Of course

I have known both of grife and happiness

I also believed that I understood you very much

but I didn't know of anything to prevent me from doing so

"Maybe I will be able to tell when I am very old."




Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-17 18:35:20]
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Re: It was too changeable (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 09:44:03 AM AEST
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I must admit that I find your writing the best I have read since being on this site. It spoke to me the most........




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