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[sid] => 142505
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Hard Deployment Days
[time] => 2008-05-20 03:04:24
[hometext] => I wrote this while my fianc'e was on deployment and I was going through an extremely tough time. Hope you enjoy it.
[bodytext] => She walks a path of emptiness, feeling so much alone Her love is gone away from her, When he leaves so does home The days are not so bad, filled with work and other things The nights are getting harder, With the empty house it brings Thoughts of him and where he is, an unavoidable truth That he's not here not by her side, But gone out fighting and he's not bullet proof On deploy is where he is, and she's here by herself Trying to deal with living, And God she could use some help Everything is going wrong, Nothing she does seems right This is the way it always is, when he;s nowhere in sight Things are getting harder, There's no end to the pain Its as deep as any ocean, and it never goes away But she puts on a smile, when she hears his voice She doesnt want him to think, she suffers for his choice Trying to be supportive, And nothing but brave When all she wants is him home, to know that he's safe And then she listens closely, to the way his voice sounds Its not easy to notice, but he is sounding down So she tried her hardest, to bring his spirits up Trying not to say her problems, because her job never stops Not only is SHE suffering, but he is hurting too Defending the country and sacrificing is what Military do Suddenly things dont look so bad, when you see it from the other side She realizes he misses her too, And she is filled with pride Yes there will be days, Where she will get distraught But that will be okay, because one phone call taught No matter how bad it gets, or impossible the way Their love will get them through these hard deployment days [comments] => 7 [counter] => 10929 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Adriean [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 44 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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